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06-30-2004, 09:09 AM
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By; Amy Aumick 2004
Poetry in... Summer words dripping Like honeysuckle. Tiny seeds of Love and Hope Grow. Buzzing, blending, Counting the days Of hot Sticky sweet Lovemaking In lemonade springs With poets who Have all gone before To create these paths Covered with vines So that the sun Shines through just so. Glow Of night storms Far enough away. The slap of the waves and mosquitos. Feast in the day. Dance the night away. |
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06-30-2004, 12:23 PM
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Wow, Aimee...LOVE IT....
This part is wicked awesome: Buzzing, blending, Counting the days Of hot Sticky sweet Lovemaking In lemonade springs With poets who Have all gone before Great visual  !
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06-30-2004, 01:39 PM
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With poets who have all gone before Whooooo thats the line i liked
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I can't decide which part I like best, so I'm just going to say.......
Amy, this is beautiful and I love it all.
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