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Old 04-29-2005, 10:00 PM   #1
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Imprisoned

Imprisioning us all...
Taking the fall...
Down a dark hall...
I want to scream...
Want to leave...
Nothing left for me to believe...
Someone needs to embrace me...
Quickly...
For life is more than I can take...
Imprisoned in this life...
I didnt choose I was put here...
But that what I guess I must lose...
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With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...

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Old 04-29-2005, 11:20 PM   #2
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I liked It
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-03-2005, 12:11 AM   #3
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This is an interesting one.
Hey, HR, what did U mean by the contrasting theme in the bottom bit? I was curious to see if U had the same meaning as I picked up
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Old 05-04-2005, 04:25 PM   #4
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For life is more than I can take...
Imprisoned in this life...
I didnt choose I was put here...
But that what I guess I must lose

This part??
If so I meant I didnt choose this life
I was put here what I must lose is
my life i must let it play as it has been planned out!!


tell me if thats what you got if not tell what you got!!

Thanks appreciate it both of you!!
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Old 05-05-2005, 10:47 PM   #5
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Yeh that bit and
Quote: Imprisoned in this life...
I didnt choose I was put here...
But that what I guess I must lose...
and then it goes to:
Quote: __________________
Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...

The meaning in the transition U know. Such unhappiness and then a wonderful freedom occurs. Seems like a death and resurrection of sorts. I thought it was really nice.
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Old 05-06-2005, 01:29 PM   #6
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Yes Yes I Love Those Topics Sweetie Thats What Its All About Come On Come On
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Old 05-06-2005, 02:14 PM   #7
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thanks guys you rock!!Yeah thats my point as well!
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