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07-20-2003, 05:51 PM | #1 |
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Another poem
I was doing some writing this afternoon and wrote the following poem:
Revelation I see things in a new and different light I see hope and freedom where there once was only a glimmer of both It helps give me strength to continue the fight It renews my spirit and energizes my soul to new heights
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07-20-2003, 06:42 PM | #2 |
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I love it Sheila. It is really good. I still haven't sat down and written anything. Maybe I will get a minute to do so soon. I really like your poems, they make you think. Keep 'em comin' girl, you are very talented.
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Thank you so much, Carrie. Your thoughtful words mean a lot to me. I was doing some journaling before I wrote it. I'd love to read some of your writing if you want to share it.
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Hi Sheila,
I like it!! It is very rich with emotion. I love the title. Really feeling the lines; I see hope and freedom where there once was only a glimmer of hope They speak to me. Now, I know you are a poet!! Keep them coming!! My best to you!! ~Honey~
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Thanks, Honey. It's great to hear that my thoughts/words speak to you. I appreciate the encouragement too.
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Sheila, that was fantastic!!
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Thanks, Teri. I'm glad you liked it.
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I loved this poem too.
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Thanks again, Kris. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Dang Girl... I think you're just another Wordsworth in disguise But seriously, it's hard to believe you haven't written before, or have you? Maybe when you were younger? Keep 'em comin! This was my favorite line (about hope & freedom)
there once was only a glimmer of both PS-Carrie, I think you should share too.
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Thank you so much, Aimee. I can honestly say that I've never done any writing before, even as a kid. Growing up, I thought I was a terrible writer. It's something I started doing just recently. I've been journaling for about 2 years but I've never done any creative writing before.
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