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06-26-2004, 10:18 AM
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Just Like Me
Just Like Me
If you could see me as I am You’d think I was insane You’ll never fully understand My sadness or my pain Could you comprehend The magnitude of my rage No, it’s simply lost to you Dead words upon a page Teaching me a lesson Is something that won’t work At times to be with others Just really seems to hurt Even when you think you’re kind I want to hide from you Yet, I need the contact… So what am I to do? Just don’t want be the one That always seems to know You can’t fix me…Please don’t try I’m not your dog and pony show Even tho, we don’t agree Doesn’t mean that I’ve been broken It’s really sad when one can’t be Honest with their emotions Why not practice What you preach… Always in denial Pretending that you’re so tough Of course that’s just your style Inside you’re feeling terrified Lost…so much like me Knowing how reality bites Living with your animosities ©2004 S.D. |
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06-26-2004, 12:48 PM
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i liked the last verse Ann
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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06-26-2004, 05:14 PM
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thanks
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06-26-2004, 06:54 PM
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that was an awsome poem!
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06-27-2004, 06:08 PM
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Great job, Ann....this verse rules:
Just don’t want be the one That always seems to know You can’t fix me…Please don’t try I’m not your dog and pony show Even tho, we don’t agree Doesn’t mean that I’ve been broken It’s really sad when one can’t be Honest with their emotions
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