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Old 07-05-2004, 11:37 PM   #1
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Strait Gate,

Strait Is The Gate And Narrow Is The Way Which Leadeth Unto Life , I Have Found The Water That Never Runs Dry Its There Peace It Flows It Always Knows The Truth The Foolish Build Without Without Wisdom Every Wise Bulider Knows That A Strong Foudation Must Be Tested Before It Shall Stand And The Rains Came And The Winds Blew And The Wolves Huffed And Puffed And Huffed And Puffed But Could Not Tear It Down Littlie Littlie Sheep Let Me Inn I Say Not By The Last Hair That Counted On My Head I Will here Your Echos In The Sand Crying O Lord Your Echos In The Sand Just Liked U Heared Mine When You Knew You Were So Un Kind To The Littlie Ones Left Behind As You Pantied Us For A Bad Example Echos In The Sand Depart From Me DEPART FROM ME You Really Never New Me But You Hated Me YOUR Genration And Leavings KILLED ME!!!! So Those The Winds May Blow My Soul Is Empty My Love Is Far From Me Demons All Around Me I SHALL NOT BE MOVED Narrow Real Narrow Is The Way Which Leadeth In To Life And Few There Will Be Found Its There In The Gate U Will Find Me As Death Follows Me Through The Narrow Is The Road I The Road Im On Its Called The Hardway There Is No Easyway I Shall not Be Moved!!!
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Old 07-06-2004, 02:34 AM   #2
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WOW, creedsister...I think this has become my favorite of yours. KILLER opening line. What a great visual!
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Wow, I really like this one! Great job girl!
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Old 07-06-2004, 12:58 PM   #4
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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