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Old 03-05-2004, 09:00 AM   #1
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Hi guys.

This is a little bit as a comeback for me on the Creative Corner part. Some of you might have read this, but you are few. But enjoy it.

Quote: (Originally Posted by Shine) Shine
If I had just one wish
Should I live without this?
You're gone and no one knows how I feel
Can't really understand that this is for real
You've spened your time way too young
Where do I now belong?

There's many things we've been through
Broken hearts but apologizes way too few
How shall I carry on without you?
I'm so sorry, I wish I could see you tonight...

Time lives another life
Times never cries
Never thought earth lied
Where were life when you died?
No else is here but me
Now you're gone, I know it will be difficult to see

There's many things we've been through
Broken hearts but apologizes way too few
How shall I carry on without you?
I'm so sorry, I wish I could see you tonight
And you know you gave me light
Of the kind that will always shine

Is there any way I can make you proud?
Please don't scream out loud
Try to live your life on your end
And I will try to move on, my friend
But I know you'll make it back someday
To watch me if I'm okay
I wish I could take you by the hand
And tell you how I feel so you could understand
Gotta keep breathing now
And carry on with life somehow
It's cold here where you left me
I know things won't get better, things will never be...
So now I can choose to live or go with you
Whatever I choose it's because I love you

There's many things we've been through
Broken hearts but apologizes way too few
How shall I carry on without you?
I'm so sorry, I wish I could see you tonight
And you know you gave me light
Of the kind that will always shine

Peace, Lith
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Old 03-05-2004, 09:50 AM   #2
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Im Breathless Really!!!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-05-2004, 12:08 PM   #3
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Well, thank you... I don't really like it that much, but everybody else seems to do.
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Old 03-05-2004, 12:13 PM   #4
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Everybody likes poems about unrequited love cuz we've all been there once or twice. Lith, I just thought of something, since English is not your first language (or is it?) do you write your words and then translate them for us?
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Old 03-05-2004, 04:20 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) Everybody likes poems about unrequited love cuz we've all been there once or twice. Lith, I just thought of something, since English is not your first language (or is it?) do you write your words and then translate them for us?

No, English is not my first language, but I'm very good at it for my age. (I'm 15). And I'm from Sweden, so I speak Swedish, dear. And no, I do not translate it for you, I write in English. Don't know why, it just feels right.
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Old 03-05-2004, 04:21 PM   #6
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What did you think of the lyric anyway?
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Old 03-12-2004, 04:07 PM   #7
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This one's the one that made me cry! It hits me...
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Old 03-12-2004, 05:48 PM   #8
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I liked the last bit best (before the chorus) Lith.
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Quote: (Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman) This one's the one that made me cry! It hits me...
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Calm down guys... It's just me, I've wrote it.

Sis, I'm just a bratt, huh? I'm just 15
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Old 03-13-2004, 10:35 AM   #11
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) Calm down guys... It's just me, I've wrote it.

Sis, I'm just a bratt, huh? I'm just 15



Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM
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Souls...
they float like the memories I've opened,
Go...
and kiss all the butterflies I've broken,
Sow...
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Grow...
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The Path ~by~ ManMade God
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Quote: (Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman)

Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM
I Will Take Cover
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Run, hide...

but Don't follow me... I'm lost too
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Old 03-16-2004, 12:36 PM   #14
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) Run, hide...

but Don't follow me... I'm lost too
Hey I Know It!!!!!! hehehe
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Old 03-16-2004, 12:59 PM   #15
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) Hey I Know It!!!!!! hehehe

It's taken from Stef's siggy.
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