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Old 12-21-2003, 05:08 AM   #1
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The Calling

On the edge of six feet down
Clutches marker words of stone
Doesn’t understand the why
Never could now can’t atone

Little boy blue is lost on you
Doesn’t follow unspoken rules
Cannot be the man so young
Open scorn a hatred fueled

Abandoned child left to fly
Little Mary he dared to cry
Ridiculed for spine so weak
Secret garden gets him high

Donning robe of black and white
Forced to swallow head held tight
Can’t confess now must suppress
Watches father bless the night

On the edge of six feet down
Clutches rope why cast in stone
Hears the angels call for him
Surrenders now to world unknown
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Old 12-21-2003, 08:53 AM   #2
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Soooo?
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:10 PM   #3
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:15 PM   #4
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Very very deep. Really thought provoking.
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:18 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by TeriB19) Very very deep. Really thought provoking.

Alright, the lyric was okay, but I like Stapp lyrics more than Alex's. (Alex Band = front man in The Calling). After all, this is a Creed board.
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:20 PM   #6
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It's just a title for my poem, extreme lithium. It has nothing to do the band The Calling. And this is the Creative Corner forum where people can post their creative musings.
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:26 PM   #7
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Oh, sorry... The funny thing about it is that Alex could've wrote it, his lyrics often kind of seem like... That! Well the lyric were... Well, good. I better check here often, maybe I could post a lyric of mine.

(Call me Lith).
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:30 PM   #8
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LOL, well, thanks, Lith, I think ...I really don't know many of The Calling's songs. I'll have to check them out some more.
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:39 PM   #9
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Yeah, actually you're a little mini-Alex! I'm more like a mini-Stapp!
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Old 12-21-2003, 12:52 PM   #10
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Hehehehe...you should post some of your stuff here. It's fun to read what's going on in other people's heads.
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Old 12-21-2003, 02:40 PM   #11
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Of course I will! I'll just check my PM first!
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Old 12-21-2003, 04:41 PM   #12
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Another great one by Dogstar! That was deep, as Teri said.
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Old 12-21-2003, 04:57 PM   #13
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Thanks, you guys!!
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) Alright, the lyric was okay, but I like Stapp lyrics more than Alex's. (Alex Band = front man in The Calling). After all, this is a Creed board.
well lord bless me,,whats that got to do with anything I loved Dogstars poem,,It was Deep
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Old 12-24-2003, 09:11 AM   #15
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Another wonderful poem Kerri!
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