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11-11-2004, 06:30 AM
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New Poem I wrote
Hey everyone this is a new poem I wrote, what ya think?
 Her mystery in the deep sea of her eyes as beautiful and forgiven as pink tulips being showered on a rainy day followed by sunlight that takes away their secret The reflection of her mystery is thrown back into my soul devouring the senseless speculation The breeze is calm for a moment, its cool tips intense its devious trail fortifying the quiet sound of the night All that's left is the stars in her eyes irradiating into my soul, chanting the inaudible melodious that penetrates my ears Her words are harmonic sounds, that gently brush my ears as her voice is a musical sound from Heaven My vigor is born, my strength confines its truth Her heart is true, its expression are beyond affection No other sound, voice, soul, flesh could emulate her truth It's beyond comprehension in which someday my heart will know |
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11-11-2004, 08:31 AM
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enjoyed reading that...descriptive and seems to be written for someone very special...thank you for sharing it with us...
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11-11-2004, 11:35 AM
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 That Freaking Rocked 
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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11-11-2004, 01:26 PM
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that was awesome!
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11-11-2004, 01:50 PM
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Thank you all for the sweet opinions
didnt think the poem was that good |
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11-11-2004, 10:06 PM
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well i thought it was kick ass and when i say its kick ass its kick ass
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Yea, Ta knows what she is talking about.
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11-14-2004, 12:05 AM
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You Know So
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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