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Old 11-29-2009, 07:25 PM   #1
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Lyrics From My Band

1)This song is a heavy song, probably the most negative. Sounds kind of like Howards Tale by sick puppies in the Chorus but I wrote this before i heard that song.

PANPHOBIA
You call me pathetic
You say you'll never love me
You call me an asshole
jealous, a loser
But I think your full of shit
Youre going to leave me
Contrary to your beleifs
You don't care if i'm
Beaten and broken
And lieing dying in the street

You think i'll be fine


[CHORUS]
Look what you did to me
You said you were my friend
But where were you when
I needed someone to comfort me
When I was on my knees
You just smiled and said
fuck you!

I make a point
To point out all your flaws
This couldn't be
Further from the truth
You're falling
For your own bullshit
Lying to yourself
So you can hate me

[CHORUS]

When your name's
In my head
It makes me wish that I was dead
Your names
In my head
Every God damned day
Ever since
You met him
You're not who you once were
To me

You're just another fucking bitch!!

[CHORUS]


2) This is a slow song, also the first song i ever wrote on guitar.


TALKING TO MYSELF
I'll be okay
You won't make me break down
All i have to say
Is written on the walls
No reason
To explain myself
Who I am
Is what we were
(What we were)

(CHORUS)
I have
Nothing
Left for you to take from me
Too late
I am
Dead and buried in the ground
The end is near now
And i'm close to the edge
I'm about to break

I may
Not be happy
But atleast
I can fake a smile
Every now and then
I try to be there
but you were never there for me

(Chorus)

3) This is also a heavy song. The verses are rapped. Bridge is screamed.

STRIPPED
You let me drown and sift
Right down through this endless shit
Down and out, down for the count
Why can't you let me be?
All i can think about it you
You were the thing that got me through
All the hard times that I faced
But now i'm who you want to erase


[Chorus]
Take me down
Take me out
I don't care if you see me screaming
Anymore
I was yours
But now you've got me face down on the floor
Give me more
Now that you have ripped out my core
I can take it

I guess i should grow up
And get back up on my feet
But it's just not that easy defeat after defeat
The only thing I wish for is that
I could take all of this back
To when I was blissfully ignorant
To what was right before my eyes
That I meant nothing to you
You were a liar in disguise

[chorus]

I put every god damned thing that I had into this
And got shit out of it
You want to go? Thats fine
But don't make me feel like shit
Because you are unhappy with having to be the goddamned bad guy
I understand where you're coming from, I never didn't
It's you that doesn't understand or just didn't care
I was here first and got tossed by the wayside
You know what, I don't have to explain myself to you
Fuck you!!!

[chorus] X2


If you stayed to read that. Congrats.
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Old 11-30-2009, 03:13 PM   #2
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Re: Lyrics From My Band

yes i did and thanks i love reading and revicing everybodys stuff i,ll be back later on too to point out some verses and lines out of each those Great Job i dont mind use of obscene language if its used to express your potery or lyrics those were just killer
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Old 11-30-2009, 04:42 PM   #3
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Re: Lyrics From My Band

Man, I don't think i've seen a user with a more fitting user name than yourself. ; )
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Thank You Burried And Gone Im A FAN Of POD , Like Yours Too As Well ok you,ve shared a lot stuff with us, so all i had time to take in was PANPHOBIA, Your going to leave me Contray To Your Beleifs Reminds me of those times when you sorta got no other choice but to hear whats being sad You dont care If Im Beaten Broken And Lieing Dying In The Street You Think I,ll Be fine But Where Were You When I needed someone To comfort me when i was on my kness I make A Point To Point Out All Your Flaws You,re Falling For Your Own Bu%&*It Lying To Yourself So You Can Hate Me,
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LIKED Those Lines Feel The Fiery Of A Conflict Really Strong In This One But The Verses I Liked Best From PANPHOBIA when your name,s in my head it makes me wish i was that i was dead, your name,s in my head every GD Day Ever since you met him you,re not who you once were to me you,re just another F(((&ck B&(*ich i,ll read the rest later Just Brilliant Lyrics
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Wow that was good A Lot Of Emotions And gut feeling went into that And The Ending Verses Was Put Together Perfectly, and these You were the ting, that got me through, all the hardtimes that i faced but now i,m who you want to erase the only thing i wish for is that i, could take all this back to when i was blissfully ignorant sounds like that relationship point one reaches when everything collides with it and our only refuge IS being restored back to simplicty very well written , Burried And Gone
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