first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)

[metalchris25]

First verse of new song:



i could tell you that I love myself

but I know that its not true

A buried faith inside cant help

to hide contempt for you


the empty shell you left behind

and things we left unsaid

haunt my sleep till I cant find

my way out of my head


seek out destroyed memories

images fractured bring me to my knees

I cry out to you bleeding out my soul

No one answers, IVE FINALLY LOST CONTROL

(chorus)

[nagpo]

that's pretty good man. post the rest

[metalchris25]

I will send the rest to any regulars to this site willing to give their email address. Legally I am not allowed to give this song away, but I accept any email as payment. cst-2238152199. Please respect my privacy and do not send it outside this site.I will have cd's and tabs available in 2 months. these songs are in production, so please please please dont share the files with anyone. I just want feedback from yall. Thanks, and God bless.
me.

[nagpo]

I see.

[bilal]

\m/ ..... \m/

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by metalchris25)

I will send the rest to any regulars to this site willing to give their email address. Legally I am not allowed to give this song away, but I accept any email as payment. cst-2238152199. Please respect my privacy and do not send it outside this site.I will have cd's and tabs available in 2 months. these songs are in production, so please please please dont share the files with anyone. I just want feedback from yall. Thanks, and God bless.
me.

i really dont need to read the rest Just Awsome Stuff what i like about these lines chris it shows and paints a glimpse OF HARD LIKE FAITH that grows by fire A BURIED FAITH INSIDE CANT HELP TO HIDE CONTEMPT FROM YOU thats a strong verse THAT BURIED FAITH We All Share Man Thank you So Much For Sharing Your Stuff With Us Blessings And Strengeth

[Dogstar]

Very cool, metalchris. It sounds promising. Keep us posted.

[metalchris25]

Here is some more of it. I forgot about posting it here. Hope you like the rest of it, though it is not all of it, I left the ending out.



" Give Me Back " (just a working title, but will probably be the actual title)

(v1)

i could tell you that I love myself

but I know that its not true

A buried faith inside cant help

to hide contempt for you


the empty shell you left behind

and things we left unsaid

haunt my sleep till I cant find

my way out of my head


seek out destroyed memories

images fractured bring me to my knees

I cry out to you bleeding out my soul

No one answers, IVE FINALLY LOST CONTROL

(chorus)

Give me back all that you stole from me

i recalaim all that is rightfully mine

Give me back what you ripped away

Im stuck here in the threads of time,

so,

GIVE ME BACK!

(v2)

Let me get back on my feet

You dont have to keep me down

Blinded love could never see

that we cannot turn around

the feelings that we try to deny

have us caught in this circle of joy and foolish pride

Our inner selves that we supressed so long

are the ones that we can never hide

(Chorus2)

So

Give me back my indignity

show me the man I used to be

Give me back the assurance of truth

Let it all bleed back out of you

this time

GIVE ME BACK

(V3)

(INTERLUDE SOLO)

(chorus3)

[TrulyAmazing]

Incredible hardcore you can feel an overcoming vibe in those verses STRONG STANDING LYRICS Loved It Blessings And Strengeth

[metalchris25]

thanks. this is a warmup video I was just toying around with a while back, but I took some of it and used it in the recording of this song.

http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fusea...oid=36598 497

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by metalchris25)

thanks. this is a warmup video I was just toying around with a while back, but I took some of it and used it in the recording of this song.

http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fusea...oid=36598 497

awsome its great toying around a playing with diffrent stuff to complete a piece and what i find funny did you ever go out of your way to take a piece of something and you just know and feel this is going be it and then how ever hard you try to make it work or fit you come back with your own original sound i would love to see the video bub but i cant get your link to open

[metalchris25]

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu...oid=36598 497

http://www.youtube.com/user/metaltolliver

[TrulyAmazing]

thank you for reposting the link It was Real