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Old 06-04-2006, 11:24 AM   #1
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"choices"????????

ummm much like anything else i have thought of before i cant really think of a title mmmmm maybe "choices" who knows, you lot are probably alot bettter at titles then me. kinda unfinished not really in a song structure just alot of stuff i wrote outa head.
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a monster has been created
dont know how to deal with it
all i know
is you want nothing to do with it

waters rise high above you
day of your reckoning has come
what will you choose
the course of action to take is open
heart chooses but mind knows best

staring into open space as if possessed
hoping for the best
just a burden for you to live by
time will tell if your right

like a parasite
you cant live without it
it beckons you to draw near
will you take the bait
or will it consume you
and leave you to your own destruction

pictures of your life flash by your eyes
like a slideshow reminding you
what you have to give up, can you live without it?
is the gain bigger then the loss
who decides, not me, only you
make the choice dont look back

soon you will snap
the anger from confusion will begin to destroy you
and those that you cherish around you
will it control you
or will you take hold
of your very own life

it wants you
you want it
it needs you
you need it
do you give in
cos it wont
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Old 06-05-2006, 01:01 AM   #2
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Re: "choices"????????

Enter ye in at the strait gate FOR WIDE IS THAT GATE AND BROAD IS THE WAY THAT LEADS TO DESTRUCTION , And Many There Will Throw In The Towel, MY GOD AND MY SAVIOUR, Never Throws In The Towel ...And Many ...There...Will Go In Thereat, BECAUSE STRAIT IS THE GATE AND NARROW IS THE WAY, Which Leadeth Unto Life And Few There Be That Find It, Matt,7.13.14 Think NOT That, Iam Come To Send Peace On Earth I Came Not To Send Peace But A Sword For I,am Come To Set A Man At Variance Against His Father And The Daughter Against Her Mother And The Daughter In Law Against Her Mother In Law And Boy Let Me Tell Ya,alls They Need Not A Bible TO BE AT WAR Even If They Dont Believe In GOD IN LAWS WAS MADE TO FIGHT AMEN!!! And A Mans Foes Shall Be Of His Own House Old He That Loves A Mother A Father Or Son Or Daughter Is Not Worthy Of Me, AND HE THAT TAKETH NOT HIS CROSS AND FOLLOWETH After Me Is Not Worthy Of Me, HE THAT FINDETH HIS LIFE SHALL LOOSE IT And He That Looses HIS LIFE FOR MY SAKE SHALL FIND IT, Matt. 11, 34.39 Man I know thats not the feed back you were hoping For but everybody here knows that i some take notions to do bible scriptures, But I Loved The Anger And The Passion And The Reason In The Entire Piece, I Would Call It My Man NEVER Letting Go Of The Cross !!! Becasue Whatever Path We Choose, We All Got Our Own Cross We Must Hold And Bare, BUT NOT ONE WILL EVER COMPARE, To The One That Was Carried To Calavary Awsome Work Man
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