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Old 01-15-2004, 01:30 AM   #1
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Die

"Betrayed again by your so-called friends
Not careing anymore about anything or anyone
Wishing yourself dead because of the words they said
Hoping that you wont wake up the next morning
Because everyone you thought you knew and loved
turned their backs on you

I want to die,I have nothing more to give
I want to die,I have no reasons left to live

Betrayel hurts,I would know
Its burns so cold,just like the snow
Except it burns in your heart,your soul, and your mind
It eats away at everything,leaving nothing behind
When the words are written deep within the sand
And I take my life away with my own two hands

I want to die, I want nothing more
I want to die, I want to see my blood hit the floor

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
My heart is pounding in my head
My soul is lifeless and almost dead
My mind is slowly caving in
I want to die!!!,when will it begin?

I want to die,I have nothing more to give!
I want to die,I have no reasons left to live!"

I wrote that in a little under 10 minutes after hearing someone tell me they dont want to talk to me anymore. Hope you like it
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Old 01-15-2004, 01:10 PM   #2
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My heart is pounding inside my head my soul is lifeless and almost dead my mind is slowly caving in i want to die went well it begin}}I Loved it mrseeker~~that person must have sucked )) LOL))
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Old 01-15-2004, 04:23 PM   #3
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Actually it wasnt inspired by anyone,oddly enough...i just felt like writing somthing and that came out,so yea. im glad you liked it.
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Old 01-15-2004, 04:49 PM   #4
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Old 01-15-2004, 08:45 PM   #5
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Thanks Kim
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Old 01-15-2004, 08:56 PM   #6
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Really liked it. Would make a killer song (no pun intended...okay yeah it was, maybe )!
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Quote: (Originally Posted by MrSeeker) Actually it wasnt inspired by anyone,oddly enough...i just felt like writing somthing and that came out,so yea. im glad you liked it.
ok i liked THE JOURANAL COOL
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HAHAHAHA,thanks
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Old 01-16-2004, 12:50 AM   #9
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Quote: (Originally Posted by MrSeeker) HAHAHAHA,thanks
HAHAHAHA your welcome
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