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Old 05-05-2005, 06:12 PM   #1
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Secret

Something happened late that night...
Something I was told to hide...
No one to confide in...
Always with me it abides...
It echos in my mind...
As the memories take flight...
Everything around reminds...
This secret I must keep...
Down deep inside...
Where no one can find...
Ashamed...
They can blame all they want...
But I'm not that blunt...
The secret I harbor...
Consumes me...
No way to be free...
This is my fee...
I must pay...
No one will beileve...
Me...
This is truth I know...
I wonder if they can see past me...
Does the secret show through...
No...
How could it...
They're all blind anyways...
A good thing maybe...
Keeping it all hid...
Locking it away...
Pushing away the thoughts...
For better days ahead...
So I was taught...
The secrets we all keep...
The ones we know we must...
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 05-05-2005, 11:15 PM   #2
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I liked it.. what is the beauty of a secret is its not a secret
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-05-2005, 11:43 PM   #3
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emotional...liked it......
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 05-06-2005, 09:21 AM   #4
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A burden some people just know all too well. Beautifully written.
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walks a dark and lonely highway...found a song to lift me up...let me cover, let me guide you, be the one to teach you love
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Old 05-06-2005, 12:27 PM   #5
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HAAAAAA...Yes It was written in beauty divine
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-06-2005, 02:16 PM   #6
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thanks for reading I appreciate it so much!!
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The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 05-07-2005, 09:41 PM   #7
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HR, I really like your stuff. Thanks for sharing!
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they make a club and beat their brother down.
How they survive so misguided is a mystery.
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