bleeding

HR2004 · 03-03-2005, 08:48 PM

The pain eating at me.
It wont leave.
Slamming around the feelings.
Getting in everyones face.
Go away.
Locking myself away.
Im about too lose it.
I cant take it.
Just want to give up.
Too many lies.
Dont even dare try to deny.
I hate this.
You should be ashamed.
Trying to put the blame on me.
Making the pain embrace me.
You never have felt what is in me.
While your playing around.
Playin theses games.
Too much to handle taking all at one time.
Im too close too breaking down.
Just want to let go.
The walls up again.
Just as fast as they came down.
Alone I wish to be.
No one can blame me.
If im all alone.
All I wanted was a friend.
Turns out im my only friend.
Me and these four walls.
What I feel echo's.
Tired,alone,hurt,upset,and blamed.
Why cant life for once just....
Go right.
Too much wrong.
Cant fix the pain to strong.
I dont belong.
This world takes too much.
My heart all over the floor.
In tiny pieces.
Too many cant be mended...
So Ill stay here in the walls.
Bleeding the pain you put there.
Forever I bleed everything you did too me.
Game over I lose.

creedsister · 03-03-2005, 09:27 PM

i like

Ann Allusion · 03-03-2005, 11:27 PM

very emotional...painful to read...gets the point across...

HR2004 · 03-04-2005, 01:21 PM

thanks well I am in alot of pain emotionaly.Im glad you liked it cs.Oh and im glad it gets the point across i was trying too.

creedsister · 03-04-2005, 03:09 PM

Anna1011 · 03-04-2005, 05:45 PM

absolutely loved it, really emotional.

HR2004 · 03-05-2005, 01:15 PM

thanks!

revisfoot · 03-05-2005, 06:50 PM

Wow, dear, very, very emotional. I've felt just like you before, and when you can re-envoke emotions like that with words, that is great art. But, yes, very nice. Complete opposite from "First Kiss" but to also be able to go from one emotional palette to another, very admirable. BTW, you know, if you need a hug, I'm right here.

HR2004 · 03-06-2005, 02:13 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by revisfoot) Wow, dear, very, very emotional. I've felt just like you before, and when you can re-envoke emotions like that with words, that is great art. But, yes, very nice. Complete opposite from "First Kiss" but to also be able to go from one emotional palette to another, very admirable. BTW, you know, if you need a hug, I'm right here.

OHH thanks thats so sweet of you.Well my life is really fast so like one thing is so great then something bad happens and I feel really sad because thats how my life goes good thing worst thing.And thanks for being here if i need a hug and ill be here for you as well.thanks i appreciate it.

03-03-2005, 08:48 PM	#1
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	bleeding The pain eating at me. It wont leave. Slamming around the feelings. Getting in everyones face. Go away. Locking myself away. Im about too lose it. I cant take it. Just want to give up. Too many lies. Dont even dare try to deny. I hate this. You should be ashamed. Trying to put the blame on me. Making the pain embrace me. You never have felt what is in me. While your playing around. Playin theses games. Too much to handle taking all at one time. Im too close too breaking down. Just want to let go. The walls up again. Just as fast as they came down. Alone I wish to be. No one can blame me. If im all alone. All I wanted was a friend. Turns out im my only friend. Me and these four walls. What I feel echo's. Tired,alone,hurt,upset,and blamed. Why cant life for once just.... Go right. Too much wrong. Cant fix the pain to strong. I dont belong. This world takes too much. My heart all over the floor. In tiny pieces. Too many cant be mended... So Ill stay here in the walls. Bleeding the pain you put there. Forever I bleed everything you did too me. Game over I lose. __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds... Last edited by HR2004 : 03-03-2005 at 09:08 PM.

03-03-2005, 09:27 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	i like __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

03-03-2005, 11:27 PM	#3
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	very emotional...painful to read...gets the point across... __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing

03-04-2005, 01:21 PM	#4
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	thanks well I am in alot of pain emotionaly.Im glad you liked it cs.Oh and im glad it gets the point across i was trying too. __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

03-04-2005, 03:09 PM	#5
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	__________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

03-05-2005, 01:15 PM	#7
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	thanks! __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

03-06-2005, 02:13 PM	#9
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by revisfoot) Wow, dear, very, very emotional. I've felt just like you before, and when you can re-envoke emotions like that with words, that is great art. But, yes, very nice. Complete opposite from "First Kiss" but to also be able to go from one emotional palette to another, very admirable. BTW, you know, if you need a hug, I'm right here. OHH thanks thats so sweet of you.Well my life is really fast so like one thing is so great then something bad happens and I feel really sad because thats how my life goes good thing worst thing.And thanks for being here if i need a hug and ill be here for you as well.thanks i appreciate it. __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

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