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06-12-2005, 04:16 PM | #1 |
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Sword Play
Sword Play Your sword is showing it’s sting Like the scorpions tail Dripping "blood" with every thrust To this unprotected heart… Carrying promises of sweetness In it’s cold steel blade Promises that nary life nor death Can fulfill…only love Past the physical into the realm of spirit Beyond this earthly plane Strike and strike again…. Wearing your opponent thin You know she is yours and will be To the end… ©2005 All Rights Reserved Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
06-12-2005, 10:55 PM | #2 |
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That Was one of you,re truly amazing poems
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
06-13-2005, 12:35 AM | #3 |
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that was a great visual!Liked it!
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thank you both...glad you liked it... ...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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Wow, I love the poem too, very deep.
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yes indeed it was one Susans Greats
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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