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Old 10-08-2005, 01:39 AM   #1
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Heres a new one that i just wrote a few minutes ago, enjoy!

Where the light meets the shadows
is where i find myself standing
Ready to cross into utter darkness
Praying for the sun to rise

At this line my mind wonders
"What would it be like
To take a step back from life"

[chorus]
As the hourglass turns
So shall I, I'll walk away
The choice is mine
As the sun comes up
To shine on me
I'll cross that line
To eternity

Where heaven meets hell
Is where you'll find me
Hanging on, indefinitly
Praying for the light to shine

At this time my heart wonders
"What would it be like
To take a step back from life"

[Chorus2]
As the clock hits twelve
I will fall, Fall from grace
The end is mine
As the world turns back
To lock me down
I'll cross that line
And bear that crown
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Old 10-09-2005, 05:21 PM   #2
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nice lyrics...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 10-11-2005, 05:50 AM   #3
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Great song
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Old 10-21-2005, 11:59 PM   #4
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so refreshing loved it
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Old 10-22-2005, 12:45 AM   #5
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thanks everyone!
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