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Old 03-02-2005, 12:56 AM   #1
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First kiss

A simple way...
So they say...
A way to show...
Show a person cares...
A kiss shares...
More than just pleasure.
You cant begin to measure.
The connection starts here.
With the simple kiss...
The first kiss special.
The kiss remebered by both...
Even when they grow old.
The memory of the first kiss...
Stays fresh.
Always linked in this special way.
Remembering that day as if it were...
yesterday.
The kiss...the first kiss.
Stays forever on the lips.
The soft touch sits on the cheeks.
So you see.
When you kiss...
It means more than what you think.
It forever lays with you.
Night and day you'll have a replay.
A happy replay of the first kiss.
I wish too kiss you...be the first one...
Who connects with your lips.
Always being linked with you.
Forever and always my kiss awaits you.
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Old 03-02-2005, 01:25 AM   #2
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Cool liked it
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-02-2005, 02:36 PM   #3
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*sigh* ...enjoyed reading that...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 03-02-2005, 05:04 PM   #4
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thank you both!
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Old 03-02-2005, 06:27 PM   #5
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That was really good. I'm actually writing a speech for my public speaking class about the history of the romantic kiss. We had to pick an informative topic, so I figured this one would be most fun. Besides, I can also ask for a volunteer to help me demonstrate the "freedom" kiss
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Old 03-02-2005, 09:25 PM   #6
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history HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA please let me know how it goes
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-03-2005, 01:12 AM   #7
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nice work!
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
But surely saved one.
Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

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Old 03-03-2005, 05:10 AM   #8
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nice, really liked it!
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*And I know*

*You’re a part of me*

*And it’s your song*

*that sets me free*

*I sing it while*

*I feel I can’t hold on*

*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

"You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same"


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Old 03-03-2005, 01:39 PM   #9
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Quote: (Originally Posted by revisfoot) That was really good. I'm actually writing a speech for my public speaking class about the history of the romantic kiss. We had to pick an informative topic, so I figured this one would be most fun. Besides, I can also ask for a volunteer to help me demonstrate the "freedom" kiss
LOL that sounds very interesting i would like to hear how it goes as well.
Thank you all for your kind words!!
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Old 03-03-2005, 04:54 PM   #10
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Well, I really did enjoy your work. Please, continue sharing! And, yes, I'll let you know how the speech goes. I wrote out a manuscript, and I must say, it is QUITE humorous.
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Old 03-03-2005, 05:09 PM   #11
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Quote: (Originally Posted by revisfoot) Well, I really did enjoy your work. Please, continue sharing! And, yes, I'll let you know how the speech goes. I wrote out a manuscript, and I must say, it is QUITE humorous.

Im glad you did and i will continue sharing and i cant wait too hear about the speech!!
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Old 03-03-2005, 06:54 PM   #12
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I'll e-mail you my manuscript so yuo can read it. What's your e-mail addy?
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Old 03-03-2005, 08:29 PM   #13
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thank you again Umm my email address is [email protected]
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