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05-24-2003, 02:12 AM | #1 |
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Another one
Hey everybody, here's another one of my poems:
don't know what to call it (I was thinking of Schizophrenia but it's too difficult, too medical): (No Name) "Hey how have you been? -Bad, I feel I've committed the worst of all sins -Why can I help? -No my life is already hell. -You can always tell me you know... -Oh misery, I'm torn by my sorrow Broken by an impossible desire Sad by my cold fire... -Don't let yourself down, don't forget I'm here To the sky I'll make you reach In the night you will live To the world you'll never cringe The one is with you my friend 'Cause for you, it's not the end. -Then why do I feel this abominable way? -It's just a crisis it happens everyday... -To the world I have no appeal... -So it's then I'll appear -I feel like I have an incredible loss -For everything there's a cause The point is to find it and get it back -Then I'll be complete, no more lacks? -Seek and you shall find 'Cause this, it's not reality, it's all in your mind..." If anyone has a name or a title for my poem, post it, I'll be really glad :P cause it's been driving me crazy for a while now....
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05-24-2003, 12:45 PM | #2 |
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it's nice
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