A Thousand Suns

[nagpo]

The coke line is dead and dry
Nothing but blood and tears
A wasted life to you and I
She lies with a smile

A child gripping onto life
A small thread to steal
Slippery hands loosen love
And the strength life reveals

I...can't go easy and appeal
The judge in me wants to steal
I cast a stone onto the unknown
Because the rage burns like a thousand suns

A failed attempt at suicide
The office drones squeal
He hung his shame and said goodbye
To the debts he couldn't deal

An older love, fading light
Faith is not so real
Convenience is the truest lie
When you want to kneel

And I...can't go easy and appeal
The judge in me wants to steal
The fear I feel from all that's here
I cast a stone onto the unknown
To me it's not real
No, it's not ideal

This rage burns like a thousand suns
This hate from something I cant tolerate
Into the sky, I pierce my eye
So the Sun cannot steal

[TrulyAmazing]

the rage burns like a thousand suns this hate from something i cant tolerate Into the sky i pierce my eye, so the sun cannot steal, AMEN, good times good times, i know those suns, it wont burn ya, the face Of God as unto The sun, the same way the ball of fire, followed the hebrews, the face of God follows us in the sun, its how we disearn the skys, and the tides, sometimes those shadows block the sun, Praise JESUS, we can fight that rage, we ye shall pray for in a closet in time will become open, sometimes the sun be to hot, of the power of false Gods, somethings cant be stolen, a beautiful piece, peace be with you,

[adparaiki]

I like it. Great lyrics, are you gonna put them into a song ?

[nagpo]

Thanks. When I was writing I was not thinking lyrically, more so poetically. But they could work into a song. However I have no melody in mind and no band. Which is a shame because I have lots of stuff I want to make into songs.

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

Thanks. When I was writing I was not thinking lyrically, more so poetically. But they could work into a song. However I have no melody in mind and no band. Which is a shame because I have lots of stuff I want to make into songs.

it always starts for me, as a melody and sometimes you gotta hear what the words and lyrics the melody is speaking, its how i write for others, and hopefully they master, the sound,