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Old 12-07-2003, 12:58 AM   #1
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12-6-03
Here is somthing i just wrote seconds ago!!!

"Murder!!! The sound makes my blood curtal!!! So beautiful.
The sound of you without air,
The thought of you holding on to one last breath,so cruel,yet,so fair.
So beautiful,whats beautiful to me is seeing you lifeless with blood splattered all over your body.

Your blood in my hands, so beautiful!!!
Your screaming voice, so beautiful!!!
Your life in my hands, so beautiful!!!
Your lifeless corpse, so beautiful!!!

Your haunting smile, tragic!!!
Your blinding beauty, tragic!!!
Your eyes,so dark and so deep, tragic!!!
Your voice like angels, tragic!!!

So tragic!!! Scream from the grave,which you tried to save!!!
Haunt the one that brought you the sun!!!
Corrupt the truth that we all knew!!!

So tragic,whats so tragic is that you were so beautiful on the surface,yet,
Beautiful as Hell deep down within"

What do you think? I am going to add more to it and stuff later,but i wanted to post this here quick. I dont even have it written on paper yet,so i am about to go write it on paper. Hope you like it!!!
p.s. This is screamed,so thats why its like it is.

*EDITED!!!! I just added to it*
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Old 12-07-2003, 01:08 AM   #2
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it really touch me,, my eyes are full,,,,,,,,,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-07-2003, 01:13 AM   #3
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Of tears? Dont say tears, i dont want it to make you cry!!!
You got what its about right? Being beautiful on the outside,but not on the inside...
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Old 12-07-2003, 01:29 AM   #4
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i got it,,ok,,im ok,,k;;;
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-07-2003, 01:50 AM   #5
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Ok,good!
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Old 12-07-2003, 02:47 AM   #6
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ok GOOD,,im going nite nite;;;;
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-07-2003, 04:41 PM   #7
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I guess this is a little too much for people,haha
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Old 12-07-2003, 06:12 PM   #8
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good song.....good lyrics...
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So break yourself against my stones
And spit your pity in my soul
You never needed any help
You sold me out to save yourself
And I won't listen to your shame
You ran away - you're all the same
Angels lie to keep control...
My love was punished long ago
If you still care, don't ever let me know
If you still care, don't ever let me know...

"Snuff" - Slipknot
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Old 12-07-2003, 06:15 PM   #9
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HAHAHA,thanks
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Old 12-07-2003, 08:46 PM   #10
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<!--QuoteBegin-MrSeeker+12-07-2003 04:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MrSeeker @ 12-07-2003 04:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I guess this is a little too much for people,haha [/b][/quote]
i think mayby its too deep,,ya know,,but of course im use too deepness,,,LOL
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<!--QuoteBegin-GeeK_2004+12-07-2003 06:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (GeeK_2004 @ 12-07-2003 06:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> good song.....good lyrics... [/b][/quote]
that too
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Old 12-07-2003, 09:33 PM   #12
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Hella good song lyrics!!! That is heav-eeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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Old 12-07-2003, 11:43 PM   #13
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Thanks!!!
I love how all the sudden people say hella good,it cracks me up,hehe.
anywayz, yea, im into the deep stuff, this is probly my favorite thing i've written...
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Old 12-08-2003, 12:26 AM   #14
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i like it to its kinda funny,,but i think its one of my faves to,, your are a really diverse writer kev,,lol
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Old 12-08-2003, 12:36 AM   #15
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Thanks, I could probly right somthing about anything. I have even written two joke songs,haha,but i love deep and dark stuff so i will keep to that
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