Blind Faith

Dogstar · 12-15-2003, 03:52 AM

Would that I had seen the signs
Of waning interest repeating lines
Didn’t care to look your way
Blind I turned so silent stayed

River of tears soaked you through
A callous heart revealed to you
Struck you down, breath it stole
Left you drained and turned you cold

Birthday passed a thoughtless gift
Given to mend a growing rift
Nonchalant she let you fall
Thunder clapping hit the wall

Medicated mind you craved
Fed desire long depraved
Self-inflicted wound you drew
Indifference wasn’t lost on you

Would that I had seen the signs
Of waning interest tired eyes
Didn’t care to look your way
Forever now am bound to pay

SCOTTSMYMAN · 12-15-2003, 09:41 AM

AWESOME! I love it Kerri!

Aimee · 12-15-2003, 12:42 PM

Yes, I can relate. That's my fave of yours so far.

creedsister · 12-15-2003, 04:57 PM

Another good one Dogstar

Dogstar · 12-15-2003, 09:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, you guys

TeriB19 · 12-15-2003, 09:07 PM

I agree, that's my favorite of yours. I can feel the pain completely.

MrSeeker · 12-16-2003, 02:19 AM

very good!!!

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-16-2003, 09:03 PM

Emotions.....wow! That Was Great!

Dogstar · 12-16-2003, 11:09 PM

Thanks!!!

Sheila63 · 12-20-2003, 06:38 PM

Great poem, Dogstar!!

JulieCitySlicker · 12-20-2003, 10:53 PM

Awesome poem Kerri

cjme · 12-20-2003, 11:05 PM

I'm a few days late but...WOW

12-15-2003, 03:52 AM	#1
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Blind Faith Would that I had seen the signs Of waning interest repeating lines Didn’t care to look your way Blind I turned so silent stayed River of tears soaked you through A callous heart revealed to you Struck you down, breath it stole Left you drained and turned you cold Birthday passed a thoughtless gift Given to mend a growing rift Nonchalant she let you fall Thunder clapping hit the wall Medicated mind you craved Fed desire long depraved Self-inflicted wound you drew Indifference wasn’t lost on you Would that I had seen the signs Of waning interest tired eyes Didn’t care to look your way Forever now am bound to pay __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

12-15-2003, 12:42 PM	#3
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Yes, I can relate. That's my fave of yours so far. __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

12-15-2003, 04:57 PM	#4
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Another good one Dogstar __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

12-15-2003, 09:00 PM	#5
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Thanks a bunch, you guys __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

12-15-2003, 09:07 PM	#6
TeriB19 Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Saving Grace Posts: 12,439 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	I agree, that's my favorite of yours. I can feel the pain completely. __________________ MK: We're never gonna have the Super Bowl of Scott Stapp vs. Myles Kennedy in a sing-off - it's ridiculous. SP: Actually, we are setting that up. MT: It was in your contract when you signed up with us.

12-16-2003, 09:03 PM	#8
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Emotions.....wow! That Was Great! __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

12-16-2003, 11:09 PM	#9
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Thanks!!! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

12-20-2003, 06:38 PM	#10
Sheila63 USER INFO » Status: Opened My Eyes Posts: 5,748 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	Great poem, Dogstar!! __________________ I was selfish, but you still loved me You gave the greatest gift of all And you set me free Relearn Love

12-20-2003, 10:53 PM	#11
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	Awesome poem Kerri __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

12-20-2003, 11:05 PM	#12
cjme USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 160 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	I'm a few days late but...WOW

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