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02-13-2004, 12:07 PM | #1 |
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Night Waves
By: Amy Aumick 2004
I float along In my dream last night I float away in the sea. In water thick as night, And black with fright, I see you coming next to me. You’re on your knees Above me You’re on your knees, Calling out to set me free. You say, Come ride with me baby You say, Come take a ride with me Within this raging sea With me. The waves sweep us up Into maritime mystery. No lighthouses illuminate Our way. It’s dark where I cannot see, Salty sweet where I cannot breathe, You’re here with me Saying baby, Come take a ride with me. We’ll sail above This raging sea. Come take a ride with me, Come inside with me. Twisting in time To your turbulent ways, No safe harbor will I find. Running away From everything divine. Drifting toward my isolation Just to hear you say, Come ride with me baby You say, Come take a ride with me Within this raging sea With me.
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AWESOME Amiee! I loved it!
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02-13-2004, 08:21 PM | #3 |
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Cool
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Thanks. What did you like most about it? Do you think it was too repetitve?
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02-15-2004, 04:00 PM | #5 |
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No i dont think it was like that at all to tell you the truth when i first read it } a song stuck in my head called: The anchor Holds} I found it very deep and some were erotic} i Always love your stuff Aim} YOU GOT IT GOING ON COME ON COME ON!!!!} I liked This line} Drifiting toward my isolation just to hear you say come ride with me within this raging sea""
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Thanks girl... I always appreciate your comments.
PS Who sings the song The Anchor?
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to tell you the truth i dont know!! i just know the song well !!! it goes something Lke this""Ive Had Visons And ive had Dreams Ive even Held Theme In my hands but i never knew They would slip right through Like They were Only grades Of sand The anchor Hold Tho The ship shatterd I have falling upon my kness As i face the ragging Sea The anchor Holds Inspite Of the storm!!! Great Song And killer Poem Its just when i read it it was the first thing that poped in my head!!!
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Amy, friggin AWESOME poem. WOW...I love the imagery.
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