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Old 01-19-2005, 05:42 PM   #1
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so much pain

On a road of pain and suffering.
Going down a road of trials and tribulations.
So much pain in this place.
You can taste the hurt.
This chain of lies you have locked.
You have the key to unlock it but,
You choose to keep it locked.
Break the chain and come clean.
All the pain you've cause its not worth it.
I dont understand why you have choosen this.
You hurt the people who are most close to you.
The tears you've put in all of our eyes.
They stay fresh.
The air heavy from all this despair.
The clouds darkening.
The rain coming.
How long till you wash yourself clean.
The rain wont clean you.
But the storm coming with the rain is going to bring it all down.
The questions in all of our minds but the one
that is at the surface is why?
So much pain and suffering we all now must face.
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Old 01-19-2005, 11:44 PM   #2
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That was awsome I really liked it
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 01-20-2005, 04:23 PM   #3
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thank you!
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