Black Gold

Dogstar · 07-17-2006, 08:42 PM

I haven't written in ages, but today I felt the urge. The fruits of my labored labor

:

Black Gold

The tainted chalice sears their soiled hands
As they raise it up in shallow victory
For all to see and bow accordingly

The bullies ascend their pulpits
As they thump their chests in earnest
So haughty are the unmasked marauders

They feign disdain for the blistering pain
As they justify their deluded quest
To be the kings of the bountiful hill

Trampling resolve
Wringing out the red
Bite the rotten apple
Chew until you’ve bled

Itchy fingers trigger the gunslingers
As they shred their knowing victims
With a barrage of rhetoric worn thin

The misguided lemmings take their places
As they horde their buckets of black gold
Chanting reason is treason in unison

Trampling resolve
Wringing out the red
Feed the green disease
Drink until you’re dead

inside_us_all04 · 07-18-2006, 11:38 PM

tottaly awsome, really sharp imagry,,

p.s cudo's for takin the name of a killer soul asylum song name too

bilal · 07-19-2006, 11:39 AM

wow.......there wasnt one line in which i did.nt flip the dictionary......thanks for adding couple to my vocabulary.... apart.... wonderful iimages kept comin.....

Dogstar · 07-19-2006, 01:42 PM

Thanks much, you guys

Rocketqueen · 08-24-2006, 02:14 AM

Thank You Doggy for me that was a visual of what i see that taunts me i really liked the unmasked part DOGGY Loved It ....it relly help let out that Godly Anger that dont cease ...Nagpo wrote a few of his in a couple of threads that like AHHHHHHHH a nerve Relaxer Again Awsome Work!!! Doggy

Dogstar · 08-29-2006, 09:25 PM

Thanks as always, Rocketqueen

Rocketqueen · 08-31-2006, 10:45 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Thanks as always, Rocketqueen

thanks as Always Doggy i love your use for words As always

bilal · 12-22-2006, 02:46 PM

came back for this one.....

nagpo · 12-22-2006, 04:12 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by bilal) came back for this one.....

holy crud this threads old

Dogstar · 12-23-2006, 01:25 PM

LOL, bilal

GrafiTTied · 12-24-2006, 08:01 AM

Wow.......just wow......

HeavensOnFire · 12-26-2006, 10:16 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) holy crud this threads old

not really but its always up for topic,

i love such topics even more so whatching trip over their own lies,untill they believe theme and fade so give,me their due,But WIPING you out was the masters master plan

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAA, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, its all condradiction anyway ,

HeavensOnFire · 12-26-2006, 10:21 PM

[quote=bilal]came back for this one. j/k haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, it was awsome good potery can make you feel so much better

HeavensOnFire · 05-12-2007, 02:19 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by bilal) came back for this one.....

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, MUHEHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA,

HeavensOnFire · 05-12-2007, 02:22 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) holy crud this threads old

I KNOW IT But not a day goes by

it does not cross my mine

07-17-2006, 08:42 PM	#1
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Black Gold I haven't written in ages, but today I felt the urge. The fruits of my labored labor : Black Gold The tainted chalice sears their soiled hands As they raise it up in shallow victory For all to see and bow accordingly The bullies ascend their pulpits As they thump their chests in earnest So haughty are the unmasked marauders They feign disdain for the blistering pain As they justify their deluded quest To be the kings of the bountiful hill Trampling resolve Wringing out the red Bite the rotten apple Chew until you’ve bled Itchy fingers trigger the gunslingers As they shred their knowing victims With a barrage of rhetoric worn thin The misguided lemmings take their places As they horde their buckets of black gold Chanting reason is treason in unison Trampling resolve Wringing out the red Feed the green disease Drink until you’re dead __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

07-19-2006, 11:39 AM	#3
bilal USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,615 Joined: Feb 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold wow.......there wasnt one line in which i did.nt flip the dictionary......thanks for adding couple to my vocabulary.... apart.... wonderful iimages kept comin..... __________________ ~~~AB-III~~~ You Should Never Come This Way To Test The Hands Of Fate You Don't Belong Here

07-19-2006, 01:42 PM	#4
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Thanks much, you guys __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

08-24-2006, 02:14 AM	#5
Rocketqueen USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,432 Joined: Oct 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Thank You Doggy for me that was a visual of what i see that taunts me i really liked the unmasked part DOGGY Loved It ....it relly help let out that Godly Anger that dont cease ...Nagpo wrote a few of his in a couple of threads that like AHHHHHHHH a nerve Relaxer Again Awsome Work!!! Doggy __________________ I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done

08-29-2006, 09:25 PM	#6
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Thanks as always, Rocketqueen __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

08-31-2006, 10:45 PM	#7
Rocketqueen USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,432 Joined: Oct 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Thanks as always, Rocketqueen thanks as Always Doggy i love your use for words As always __________________ I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done

12-22-2006, 02:46 PM	#8
bilal USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,615 Joined: Feb 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold came back for this one..... __________________ ~~~AB-III~~~ You Should Never Come This Way To Test The Hands Of Fate You Don't Belong Here

12-22-2006, 04:12 PM	#9
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Quote: (Originally Posted by bilal) came back for this one..... holy crud this threads old __________________ I really have nothing to say

12-23-2006, 01:25 PM	#10
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold LOL, bilal __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

12-26-2006, 10:16 PM	#12
HeavensOnFire USER INFO » Status: Wound Up Posts: 1,070 Joined: Oct 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) holy crud this threads old not really but its always up for topic, i love such topics even more so whatching trip over their own lies,untill they believe theme and fade so give,me their due,But WIPING you out was the masters master plan HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAA, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, its all condradiction anyway , __________________ When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You

12-26-2006, 10:21 PM	#13
HeavensOnFire USER INFO » Status: Wound Up Posts: 1,070 Joined: Oct 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold [quote=bilal]came back for this one. j/k haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, it was awsome good potery can make you feel so much better __________________ When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You

05-12-2007, 02:19 AM	#14
HeavensOnFire USER INFO » Status: Wound Up Posts: 1,070 Joined: Oct 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Quote: (Originally Posted by bilal) came back for this one..... HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, MUHEHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, __________________ When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You

05-12-2007, 02:22 AM	#15
HeavensOnFire USER INFO » Status: Wound Up Posts: 1,070 Joined: Oct 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Black Gold Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) holy crud this threads old I KNOW IT But not a day goes by it does not cross my mine __________________ When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You

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