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11-12-2005, 11:43 PM | #1 |
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hand to hold
circling around , beaten back to the past
no sense of direction and no bearings dark clouds cover the celestrial guide Im lost at sea tonight pre chorus I want to dance with you on the shore when your gone so long you forget what it means to be human chorus let me love you again I need a hand to hold though its been a while you are still my home 2nd verse been here before, said Id never return such is life when I choose to be blind following my own flawed judgement thats gotten me here lost at sea tonight pre chorus " " chorus " " interlude wait the canvas is clearing in my mind wait he paints a guiding light wait your patince is not in vain As God as my witness I will make it back the water's a bed of serenity well lay and marvel at the mystery of redemption that we have seen if only you too can forgive me chorus " " |
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i need to add more to the verses . Im also thinking of If only as the title . if anyone has suggestions for a title or verses then please share.
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11-13-2005, 12:16 AM | #3 |
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beautiful verses ...even though im not much for poems I really liked this one...
but also it seems to fit the sad moment Im living...
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So while I'm turning in my sheets And once again, I cannot sleep Walk out the door and up the street Look at the stars Look at the stars, falling down, And I wonder where, did I go wrong. "I know a girl (Gio ) She puts the color inside of my world" Girls become lovers who turn into mothers So mothers be good to your daughters too |
11-13-2005, 12:24 AM | #4 |
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ive never had a girlfreind so its not about me, but parts of it are about coming back to God as a guide in my life and being lonely and feeling lost. I thought of it when I was boating last night being around water always makes me want a girl really badly.
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11-13-2005, 12:57 PM | #5 |
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im sure you will find an amazing title yourself loved it
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I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done |
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