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Old 11-07-2005, 09:35 AM   #16
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Quote: (Originally Posted by uncertaindrumer) ^I just got rid of that stupid stanza... have no idea why it was in there in the first place. Usless piece of crap.

Anyway as for the melody, I have one. That's why verse/chorus/verse/chorus doesn't work well for me when you are JUST seeing the lyrics. It will just be repetative. There is definitely a melody though, not to fear, lol And it isn't just repeating itself, musically, over and over again. It changes.

As for the long words... meh. Long words I like. lol
thats awsome my friend some melodys you can just hear changing its a must for some lyrics so we can feel theme .... Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa Job Well Done
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Old 11-07-2005, 10:53 PM   #17
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Quote: They tell no lies, hide none behind their eyes
The brutal truth is conveyed
But she bears it all with what she can
Attempting to let him become a man

Really like these...
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Old 11-07-2005, 10:57 PM   #18
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lyrics, lyrics, lyrics....ok here is my poem Crack The Whip, I already posted it as a topic, but ah vell, I stole the last part from Creed, never really been good with endings so if you can think of an original one please tell me.... you can make this into a song or lyrics like all my poems so yeah...
Crack The Whip
Caught in the crossfire I struggle through
Frantic, faction, focus guides me too
Death so near everything goes black
Only a small light shines
The nightmare continues as we dodge bullets fired by our enemies
We can’t dodge them forever
Darkness envelops the week
The strong continue to seek
The hope, we search, we try, we cry
Wandering unknowingly through a maze
Our life clouded in a haze
Mist and sorrows
We struggle with the thoughts of peril and death
I walk down a dark alley
A streetlight miles away
Here the shadows conceal the terror
I walk slowly and somberly through
Sad eyes follow me
I don’t know what to do
There are always the questions
Yes the questions
What if?
What if I?
What if your words could be judged like a crime?
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Old 11-07-2005, 11:17 PM   #19
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not a word metalenus or whatever you spell your name as, lol, I know already I stol frantic faction focus from say I, thankies for the information, lol
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Old 11-07-2005, 11:22 PM   #20
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Ummm... dude you aren't supposed to post your song in another's thread. And you end the song with someone else lyrics... what on Earth...
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Old 11-07-2005, 11:24 PM   #21
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not a dude...female...thankies
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Can you look into my eyes and say you won’t betray me
Tabula Rasa from The Dark Poet!
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Old 11-07-2005, 11:45 PM   #22
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Quote: (Originally Posted by uncertaindrumer) Ummm... dude you aren't supposed to post your song in another's thread. And you end the song with someone else lyrics... what on Earth...
yes sweetie i agree no ofense but you gotta got start your own thread before ya do that its ok though just remembear next time it makes me kinda dizzzzzzzzzy
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Old 11-07-2005, 11:47 PM   #23
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oh sorry....ok then, but I already did, never mind
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Tabula Rasa from The Dark Poet!
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Old 11-08-2005, 12:06 AM   #24
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Quote: (Originally Posted by stappissohot) oh sorry....ok then, but I already did, never mind
Its ok sweetie i left you comment over there its good stuff i screw up all the time and cause myself i will post something in the wrong thing like what time is right now in the music matters or vice versa
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Old 11-08-2005, 03:09 AM   #25
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Quote: (Originally Posted by uncertaindrumer) Ummm... dude you aren't supposed to post your song in another's thread. And you end the song with someone else lyrics... what on Earth...

See?...give a title to your song, uncertain....
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She puts the color inside of my world"
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Old 11-08-2005, 09:22 AM   #26
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You come up with one
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Old 11-08-2005, 10:43 AM   #27
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ana4Stapp) Really like these...
yes those are the lines i liked except for the becoming a man part
they tell no lies hide none ..behind their eyes
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Old 11-08-2005, 07:20 PM   #28
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Rocketqueen) yes those are the lines i liked except for the becoming a man part
they tell no lies hide none ..behind their eyes


well...actually 'to let him become a man' is the part I like more...lol
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Walk out the door and up the street
Look at the stars
Look at the stars, falling down,
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"I know a girl (Gio )
She puts the color inside of my world"
Girls become lovers who turn into mothers
So mothers be good to your daughters too
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Old 11-08-2005, 07:21 PM   #29
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Quote: (Originally Posted by uncertaindrumer) You come up with one


Five weeks...
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Look at the stars
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She puts the color inside of my world"
Girls become lovers who turn into mothers
So mothers be good to your daughters too
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Old 11-08-2005, 07:46 PM   #30
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Thn that is it's name. I'd edit the title but I am not sure how. lol
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