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Old 08-01-2004, 12:55 AM   #1
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You and me!

You and me what you want us to be.
I just dont know.How could I see it through.
I love you but how can you ask me to be with you.
when you know how much I feel about you.
So deep and true so you ask me why i cant be with you.
I answered like this your eyes so breath taking.
Looking into them its like looking into your soul.
Telling me your story.Your hand grabbing mine.
Your touch so warm and soft.
So inviting to go to a special place in my heart.
Will you stop breaking a part these walls ive kept up so long.
Its nice to know someone cares so much you make me laugh,
make me smile,and also you make me forget my terrible past.
You also asked me why Im so scared to get to deep with you
its simply because to hurt you would be the worst and would hurt me too.
it would shatted my heart even more.
You and me i want to be but why try when it wont be always.
I know I know why think of the future but thats what i do.
The future is'nt it what we live for so why be with you when all
I'll do is hurt you why put you through that.
Dont look at me with those eyes of yours they take me away
and make me want to stay.
Dont make me feel this way.
dont you understand you and me we can never be.
we cant be what I also wish were ment to be but not today.
so could you please wait for me.
So one day we can be what we want and desire to be.
someday you'll see its worth waiting for.
trust me its hard for me too to be apart like this from you.
When im in your presence when i am lucky enough to be
breathing the same air as you do.
oh please i will wait for you wont you wait for me too.
someday it will come.when you and me when we can be
together always not just for a little while but right now
lets just leave it at that.you and me will come to be what we
are ment to be.forever and always you and me.
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Old 08-01-2004, 01:36 AM   #2
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amazing a lot went into that one
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 08-01-2004, 07:12 AM   #3
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deep...but it says what it must...
i agree a lot of heart went into that piece.

~peace
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Old 08-01-2004, 10:19 AM   #4
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thanks!
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