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06-30-2006, 11:29 PM | #1 |
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Open Casket Mouth
Open Casket Mouth I'll talk in circles and you keep that open casket you call your mouth closed for these are my thoughts upon the grave circumstances you've exposed if not for you I feel I would be reading my own eulogy today or the day after but thanks to your helping hand this ending will be filled with dancing and laughter dancing upon my grave and laughter at the blank stare upon my pale, white face when the real humor is tossed upon my coffin like the rose you tossed upon in disgrace I'll never forgive myself for the way I watched you die With a smirk on my face and one blinded eye One open to see the truth, one closed to deny do you believe dreams have their imperfections as well as I do because reality has failed me more times than I care to explain so i feel these morbid dreams are all i have left to cling to because everything else in this world has just brought me pain I'll talk in circles and you stop putting words in my mouth unless you want a fist in yours. Last edited by Bleeding Love : 06-30-2006 at 11:31 PM. |
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Re: Open Casket Mouth
ahh......nice read.....very nice indeed
""I'll never forgive myself for the way I watched you die With a smirk on my face and one blinded eye One open to see the truth, one closed to deny """ thats amazing.....nice visualisations comming to me....... .....ah....i am a bit confused here..... is in this poem...are we refering to the casket......or something else???
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