++ Alter Bridge - Fortress ++ PreOrder NOW!!  
Go Back   CreedFeed Community > Community Central > Waxing Poetica
Today's Posts «

Post Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Old 06-30-2006, 11:29 PM   #1
Bleeding Love
Bleeding Love's Avatar
USER INFO »
Status: Silence Speaks
Posts: 61
Joined: Jun 2006
Currently: Offline
Contact:  Send a message via AIM to Bleeding Love
Open Casket Mouth

Open Casket Mouth

I'll talk in circles and you keep that open casket you call your mouth closed
for these are my thoughts upon the grave circumstances you've exposed

if not for you I feel I would be reading my own eulogy today or the day after
but thanks to your helping hand this ending will be filled with dancing and laughter
dancing upon my grave and laughter at the blank stare upon my pale, white face
when the real humor is tossed upon my coffin like the rose you tossed upon in disgrace

I'll never forgive myself for the way I watched you die
With a smirk on my face and one blinded eye
One open to see the truth, one closed to deny

do you believe dreams have their imperfections as well as I do
because reality has failed me more times than I care to explain
so i feel these morbid dreams are all i have left to cling to
because everything else in this world has just brought me pain

I'll talk in circles and you stop putting words in my mouth unless you want a fist in yours.
__________________
myspace

hung from the rafters with care
Kevin Fitz<3

Last edited by Bleeding Love : 06-30-2006 at 11:31 PM.
Reply With Quote
Old 07-06-2006, 11:54 AM   #2
bilal
bilal's Avatar
USER INFO »
Status: Said Eyes
Posts: 4,615
Joined: Feb 2006
Currently: Offline
Re: Open Casket Mouth

ahh......nice read.....very nice indeed

""I'll never forgive myself for the way I watched you die
With a smirk on my face and one blinded eye
One open to see the truth, one closed to deny """


thats amazing.....nice visualisations comming to me.......


.....ah....i am a bit confused here..... is in this poem...are we refering to the casket......or something else???
Reply With Quote
Old 07-06-2006, 08:14 PM   #3
Bleeding Love
Bleeding Love's Avatar
USER INFO »
Status: Silence Speaks
Posts: 61
Joined: Jun 2006
Currently: Offline
Contact:  Send a message via AIM to Bleeding Love
Re: Open Casket Mouth

It comes from the Bible verse that says, your mouth is like an open grave.

Thank you
__________________
myspace

hung from the rafters with care
Kevin Fitz<3
Reply With Quote
Post Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Open Your Eyes Finaldecision Waxing Poetica 2 03-02-2006 04:03 AM
Open Your Eyes - LYRICS... Bridge of Clay Alter Bridge Talk 16 10-24-2005 12:52 AM
Open Your Eyes Creed_Defaultgirl Waxing Poetica 7 07-07-2004 12:28 AM
Open Your Eyes Lyrics lpshinoda11 Creed Talk 13 06-18-2004 01:10 AM


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 09:01 PM.

Powered by vBulletin Version 3.5.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright © 2004 Steve Caponetto. All Rights Reserved.