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Old 06-26-2004, 09:41 PM   #1
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good bye

No more no more did you hear me no more leave me alone.
why wont you let me be I asked you now go flee from here
and dont return i beg you to stay away for the rest of our days
i gave you the best of me now wont you please leave honestly
why do you wish to stay and make me cry we've tried to many times
theres nothing else to do just go why wont you go why do you persist
on this i really wish you would leave i'm sorry i have too be like this but
i'm tired i've cried too many times to try again dont kiss me like that
im in love with you but i can never forgive you i've tried but i will never
forget you.I love you with all my heart and soul but you dont love me
like i love you so it's not fair to me so you'll just have to get over it im sorry
too say i love you but i cant help that i do i really do all too much i'll get
stronger someday but right now i cant put up this fight anymore i can not pursue with you any longer so this is where i say good bye.
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Old 06-27-2004, 12:39 AM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-27-2004, 03:13 PM   #3
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this poem really sucked didnt it?
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Old 06-27-2004, 06:07 PM   #4
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i felt about something like this

i never 2 cause u any sorrow, i never wanted 2 cause u any pain i onloy wanted 2 one time see u laughing in the purple rain i never wanted 2 be your weekend lover i only wanted 2 be some kinda of friend baby i could never steal u from another its such a shame our friendship had 2 end purple rai8n purple rain i only wan 2 see u underneath the purple rain honey i know times changing its time we all reach out for something new u say u want a leader but u cant seem to make up your mind i think u better close it and let me guide you to the purple rain!!!!!!!!!!! A MJaster Peace Of A Song, y,alls By That Sexy MF Prince!!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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