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Old 12-12-2004, 11:58 PM   #1
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Dead to Rights

Ok, i never posted in here before, but figured i would give it a shot.

[[Dead To Rights]]

In the heart of hell awaits a saint
Condemned for nothing, he begs for release
Cries so distant, a plea so faint
Unearthed a hatred for all his beliefs

Searing pain for eternity
He lies so still, so catatonic
Condemned for what he lived for
He believed he was right, he believed...

(Chorus)
So does the seventh circle of hell await
Those who know how to love
Or those who know how to hate
So many faces of a man
So many with a different plan
Some who would give it all
for what they believe
And some who would fall

So he was handed his death warrant
Dead to rights
Awaiting his pennance
He'll be dead tonight

Doesn't know what he did
Never cared enough to know
Inside he cries for his life
But outside he'll never let it show

[Chorus]
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Old 12-13-2004, 12:40 AM   #2
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Wow, that is killer, tremonti4life04! Excellent job.

I loved this part:

So many faces of a man
So many with a different plan
Some who would give it all
for what they believe
And some who would fall
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Old 12-13-2004, 12:55 AM   #3
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Thank you Dogstar, i appreciate your kind words
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Old 12-13-2004, 09:57 AM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Wow, that is killer, tremonti4life04! Excellent job.
Me 2 And The Last Verse
I loved this part:

So many faces of a man
So many with a different plan
Some who would give it all
for what they believe
And some who would fall
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