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Old 06-01-2005, 11:24 PM   #1
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Life's storm

Shadows of pain...
Paint the rain...
As it makes a stain...
That will forever remain...
Angry memories stay alive...
Within the mind...
Creating a lightning strike...
Gives us a fright...
That stays through the night...
sadness that still exsists...
Produces the rumble...
Of the thunder...
That makes us all wonder...
We all start to stumble...
As we fumble...
Through the rumage...
Looking out at the damage...
After the storm tears us apart...
Our hearts...
Grow smaller than before...
Makes us bitter...
And vain...
Put us to shame...
Peering at our lives...
They say every cloud has a silver lining...
I think the silver in this cloud...
Has slowly faded into a cold gray...
Now as I start over...
I begin to pray...
For a brighter day...
Is my hope I display...
Life storms...
Come through without warning...
But there will always be mourning...
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-01-2005, 11:50 PM   #2
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that was awsome they say every cloud has a silver lining i think this silver lining has slowly faded into cold gray
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Old 06-02-2005, 02:01 AM   #3
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...excellent piece....
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-02-2005, 12:06 PM   #4
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thanks I enjoyed writting this one alot!
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Old 06-02-2005, 12:47 PM   #5
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Wow, great done HR2004
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