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Old 05-22-2005, 10:05 PM   #1
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Eternity

Eternity

Take a walk with me he said
With a gleam in his eye
I will show you things anew
How they will mystify…
I took his hand and as we walked
The trees gave off a ghostly glow
Of sparkling green…a rebirth
What else had this man to show

Quietly we talked and cajoled
With smiles on our faces
Just being in his company
Took me to exotic places
We came upon a river
Beneath the trees we sat
And whiled away the rest of the day
With our friendly chat

The birds were brightly singing
Mixed with the symphony of the river’s sound
The sky was turning crimson
As we watched the sun go down
One by one the stars blinked on
Ne’re had I felt such serenity
He slipped his arm around my waist…
We named this place, Eternity

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Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 05-22-2005, 11:21 PM   #2
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that was awsome Great Visual
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-23-2005, 08:18 PM   #3
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thank you, cs...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 05-27-2005, 10:52 PM   #4
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Pleasure was all mine
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-28-2005, 11:12 AM   #5
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liked it!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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