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07-06-2004, 02:31 AM | #1 |
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Breakdown
I cannot fault you
For running away I cannot blame you For not wanting to stay I shattered your final threshold of pain I pushed you over and crushed what remained Wash me away like blood from your hands Banish me to the cellar of your soul I am not worthy of a place in your heart I will only work to tear you apart I cannot fault you For trusting in me I cannot blame you For believing in me I broke your will when I fell yet again I killed your hope when I let the devil win Dust me off your virgin marble table Blow me away from your cracked window sill I am not worthy of a place in your heart I will only work to break you apart
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07-06-2004, 03:05 AM | #2 |
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Great job Kerri, I really liked the last stanza.
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Many thanks, Creed_Defaultgirl!
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That is one powerful statement. Outstanding job Kerri. You should definitely be published, girl.
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Have to go with Teri here. Great work , Kerri. Sounds a little Maynardish( ) to me.
Very strong, emotional words!
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LOL @ Maynardish (it sounds like a condiment, hehehe)...thank you, ladies. As always, you are too kind!
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ROTFLMFAO!!!! A condiment ,huh!! You are too much!!
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...Like a cross between mayo/relish...I'm just leaving it at that...my mind is going in naughty places
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Well, when it comes to Maynard my mind always wanders in dirty places.
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Hahahahaha, same here!!! GREAT avie! :drool:
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Thats the part i liked too, Great Title Too
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Thank you kindly, creedsister!
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LOL, I was thinking the same thing. Great poem, Kerri. I agree with Terri and Kris, you should be published.
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wow good job
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does kinda have a "Sober" feel to it...lol...some nice writing, dogstar...
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