Cut The Chain

MissSeeker · 06-01-2005, 03:58 PM

Cut the chain

There's a space
a place where silence speaks
when you feel all you're running away from
and when no voice surrounds you
and noone is around you
the silence speaks stronger then a voice

deep in the ocean we call ourselves
you can hear every wave of emotion
and you know your storms
and what's suppressed
starts to rise up

a thought that knows us
the thoughts that stop us
the thoughts that controle us
you can hear the door of yesterday closing
as you forget about your brakes

can I hear the voice I need to hear
can I hear what the silence tells
what a long road we have to take sometimes
to find out such simple things

we could be spared so many tears
if we had some faith
and we can cry so much
untill the storm subsides
we feel the knife
'cause once we know hurt
we don't want to let go
we don't want to take a chance

do I know what's right
will I run away from an open heart?
am I ready to take a chance
and still be able to take a fall
I know time will cut the chain
and serenity will remain

creedsister · 06-01-2005, 04:39 PM

The Entire Writing Was Awsome But I Liked These Lines The Best WHAT A LONG ROAD We Have To Take Sometimes to FIND OUT SUCH SIMPLE THINGS...We Could Be Spared So Many Tears If We Had SOME FAITH And We Can Cry So Much Untill THE STORM SUBSIDES We Feel The Knife Cause Once We Know HURT We Dont Want To Let Go We Dont Take A Chance ..Do I Know Whats Right Will I Run A Way From A Open Heart And Still Be Able To Take A Fall I KNOW TIME WILL CUT THE CHAIN AND SERENTIY WILL REMAIN

HR2004 · 06-01-2005, 07:43 PM

Yes the entire writting was awesome!!Go you!That was amazing!

Ann Allusion · 06-01-2005, 08:27 PM

nicely done...great writing...

creedsister · 06-01-2005, 11:54 PM

i agree it ROCKED

MissSeeker · 06-02-2005, 09:49 AM

Thanks everyone

06-01-2005, 03:58 PM	#1
MissSeeker USER INFO » Status: A Melody Posts: 320 Joined: May 2005 Currently: Offline	Cut The Chain Cut the chain There's a space a place where silence speaks when you feel all you're running away from and when no voice surrounds you and noone is around you the silence speaks stronger then a voice deep in the ocean we call ourselves you can hear every wave of emotion and you know your storms and what's suppressed starts to rise up a thought that knows us the thoughts that stop us the thoughts that controle us you can hear the door of yesterday closing as you forget about your brakes can I hear the voice I need to hear can I hear what the silence tells what a long road we have to take sometimes to find out such simple things we could be spared so many tears if we had some faith and we can cry so much untill the storm subsides we feel the knife 'cause once we know hurt we don't want to let go we don't want to take a chance do I know what's right will I run away from an open heart? am I ready to take a chance and still be able to take a fall I know time will cut the chain and serenity will remain __________________ "...in the frozen night I prayed, for a touch of warmth so long delayed...

06-01-2005, 04:39 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	The Entire Writing Was Awsome But I Liked These Lines The Best WHAT A LONG ROAD We Have To Take Sometimes to FIND OUT SUCH SIMPLE THINGS...We Could Be Spared So Many Tears If We Had SOME FAITH And We Can Cry So Much Untill THE STORM SUBSIDES We Feel The Knife Cause Once We Know HURT We Dont Want To Let Go We Dont Take A Chance ..Do I Know Whats Right Will I Run A Way From A Open Heart And Still Be Able To Take A Fall I KNOW TIME WILL CUT THE CHAIN AND SERENTIY WILL REMAIN __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

06-01-2005, 07:43 PM	#3
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	Yes the entire writting was awesome!!Go you!That was amazing! __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

06-01-2005, 08:27 PM	#4
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	nicely done...great writing... __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing

06-01-2005, 11:54 PM	#5
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	i agree it ROCKED __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

06-02-2005, 09:49 AM	#6
MissSeeker USER INFO » Status: A Melody Posts: 320 Joined: May 2005 Currently: Offline	Thanks everyone __________________ "...in the frozen night I prayed, for a touch of warmth so long delayed...

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