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12-30-2003, 02:29 AM
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"Untitled"
"Morbid is this,
This disease that haunts our nation, Self mutilation I cut away,hoping I forget yesterday!!! I cut away,hoping it all goes away!!! I bleed to feed the coals that only bring me more pain!!! I bleed and wish it all away,all the hate inside of me!!! Cut!!! Bleed!!! Scream!!! Morbid is this, This disease that eats away at me!!! Self mutilation I look at the penetration and see the past slowly bleed away!!! I turn away and curse today Cut (me)!!! Bleed (Crimson)!!! Scream (my name)!!! I look at the penetration and see the past slowly bleed away!!! I look inside and see myself slowly fade away..." I just wrote that second ago, hope ya's like it  It was inspired by the people that hurt themselve's each day trying to take their pain away.
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12-30-2003, 02:37 AM
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killer At one time i was cutter and i went to tanning beds to hide the scars it never worked untill one fine day god took theme all away completley``id call it cut the pain away
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12-30-2003, 03:21 PM
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Awsome! That was really, really good! This is definantly a sad world, huh.
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Thanks!
Ta, Thats sad to hear that you used to cut yourself,but its good God changed you. Well,that is an awesome title,but I think I want to keep it untitled,but yea, thats def. an awesome title I actually cut myself a couple times and found out that my friend cut her wrist,so i kinda wrote it because of that...Im not gonna cut myself again(i hope)
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12-30-2003, 05:55 PM
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I Hope
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I guess this isnt as good as my other stuff...
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i thought it was Good
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Thanks, which was your favorite out of the ones I've written?
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the things that should be~`the beautiful tragdey,,~Hold me in Darkness~
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Yea,those are my favorite one's too
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you know i love all your stuff but i thought it was like a trick question,,HaHa
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Awww,thanks
No,it wasnt a trick question,i just was wondering,hehe Well,i g2g for now,ttyl
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word later kev
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that was awesome!! (not all the actual cutting) but it works on so many levels.
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Thanks man
Ta, awww,you called me kev,hehe. You can call me kev all you want
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