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07-10-2004, 12:22 AM | #1 |
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Faceless (its long)
Kim, you can post it here if you'd like
You got to dig deep into this one to get whats going on. enjoy! Faceless ©2004 When did my life pass me by When did it all happen (Standing in a sea of faces, I feel so lost Everything seems so abstract and I don't know what to do or even feel I felt my heart pumping for a brief second I saw myself come to life, but I turned my back) (Its so hard to watch it all bleed away into the sunset As the colors blend into a soft silhouette of the past Its so dark now and I cant escape what is destroying me I see a light, it is so far off though that I cant grasp it Can't I feel your face once more? Then I could leave all my thoughts of you at the door ...on my way out I'll throw everything else to the curb and close my eyes) (So I'm depressed again because I'm without your touch I can feel my chest giving way now Comfort me until you see me begin to bleed You see the shovel in the ground and the knife in my hand? Bury me, complete me When you see me shed a tear thats when you will know that I'm home So much for wishful thinking I'm not feeling very creative at the moment And I don't think anyone cares) We saw the death and life of one who lost it all in the blink of an eye We saw the truth get corrupted and for that we chose to die We felt the tragic events bury us underneath all our guilt and shame We questioned the events at hand and pointed the blame Just the poison in your system you could never throw away The taste of something ugly through my own decay Point your fingers at me if you want your justice I was some how the enemy and the victim in all of this I'll find a way to disclose all that led you to me Hide behind my face of disgrace until I no longer see Any of this mess that I got myself into Ill find my own way to break through ...Me and you will fade off into the distance soon I am of the faceless and the damned Chose to lose it all with my broken upper hand I'm pressing forward with every step unwalked And its been days since I have even talked I think I need to help myself come undone fighting this losing battle thats already won And I cant help, but want to choke up all this blood Ever since I've been drowning in it like a flood I get the feeling that you might not even care in I drown Its pitiful how I take out the rope and tie it around Me and you will fade into the distance soon I am of the faceless and the damned Chose to lose it all with my broken upper hand (Chase the tears of blood down your face What was it that made me want to hurt you? I never meant anything by what I did and said Even though I can never take it back Will you trust me again at some point in time? It so hard to watch you bleed away into the sunset I don't think I can leave you behind, this time Did you feel it when I put my hand into yours as you drifted away? I'll slit my wrists before I let you go again I say I love you for the first and last time all at once So hard it is to let you go, as you step just out of reach I'm holding you, can you feel it? Blood flowing freely from my hands As the ashes of my betray kiss you on the cheek) This is not the end I swear I'll see you again. ©Stuff This Good Dont Need Titles Publishing Inc. 2004
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07-10-2004, 01:56 PM | #2 |
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Dig Deep To Find Out Whats Going On I Find This One The Deepest One Yet Aside From Many !!!!! I LOVE IT Write On!!!!!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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hahahaha,thanks alot Ta! Im gonna post "The Voiceless" now.
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07-11-2004, 11:49 PM | #4 |
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Just read it
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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wow...the quoted verse above could have sooo many meanings to who ever chooses to read this piece...xlent writing, man... |
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Loved it Seeker, keep writing for us
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Thank you both. Im glad you enjoyed it
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That's awesome, MrSeeker....I love this part the best:
We saw the death and life of one who lost it all in the blink of an eye We saw the truth get corrupted and for that we chose to die We felt the tragic events bury us underneath all our guilt and shame We questioned the events at hand and pointed the blame
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Thank you
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I like it. It gives a lot of thought about the world. Especially those lines that are quoted above. It shows how wicked, cruel, and difficult life can be. Especially the line, We saw the truth get corrupted and for that we chose to die. That line strikes me hard.
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Rev 3.20
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Thats very good Kevin Very deep and expressive!
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Thanks
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