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Old 06-02-2005, 02:02 AM   #1
Ann Allusion
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When Lightening Strikes

When Lightening Strikes

There’s a storm a brewin’
Clouds are movin’ in
Blue sky's getting’ hazey
A light show’s gonna begin

Feel the passion in the air
Even the blind could see
I’ve become the lightening rod
To his electricity

Struck…there’s only silence…
Don’t know what to say
Tongue tied and twisted up
Words just fade away

Look into each others eyes
Standing face to face
Neither of us want to move
From this sacred space

Second strike…watch sparks fly
As he pulls me in
Encircled by his tender arms
Let the game begin

His scent somehow warms me
He’s turning up the heat
How my heart is racing
My knees are getting weak

Breathing softly in my ear...
Then my cheek, at last…my lips…
Heaven and earth by lightening moved
With his gentle kiss…

©2005
Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-02-2005, 12:06 PM   #2
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Loved it!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-02-2005, 12:08 PM   #3
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that was as a powerful as it was beautiful Wonderful Writing Ann ........
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-02-2005, 12:56 PM   #4
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Great work very inspiring

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Old 06-02-2005, 08:46 PM   #5
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thanks, you guys are so sweet....glad you enjoyed it...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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