A one year ago....Relearn Love

[Ana4Stapp]

Quote: (Originally Posted by uncertaindrumer)

Meh, we all worry about what others think when we write music. We don't write music so that people will hate it, we try to make it so thta people will like it. Trying to say "It just coems from the heart" is all well and good but you aren't going to sing a song to your girlfriend that goes liek this:

I love you
You are awesome
You are so cool
Wow I love you
Oh yeah
I think we
Were meant to be
don't you see
You make me want to be
What I can be


You jsut aren't. Everyone KNOWS those lyrics suck beyond words, and yet technically you coud play the "heart" card or the "opinion" card. Some things are objectively better than others, even in music. Otherwise, there would be no such thing as singing "off"-key.

Yeah,uncertain, I got your point...write lyrics is probably not a easy thing to do (i think)...of course when you write one song you expect it will be great and consequently expect that people like it. But I think you are refering to the common sense we all have to to analyze our works and abilities.Thats positive but when you are so worried about to the other opinion, is like someone trying to please everybody --its sounds like a doubt in your own talent...Hey, I dont have any doubt about your talent to write lyrics, ok? Dont take offense.

Also, I'm sure there's a lot of "artists" who write/sing songs like your example above ...



PS:... those lyrics above = amazing, man.... lol ,jk

[creedsister]

i know it Ana those were good man HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Ya she did a copyright HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAA

[creedsister]

that a should not a she HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

[titan9]

The thing is, with my lyrics at least, I'm not trying to write songs that other people will like. I have no idea if I'll ever even show those lyrics to someone else or if I'll ever persue a music career. For now, that is just my way of getting out my feelings. I try to rhyme as much as I can(to keep the rhythm), but only if it helps the song, not hurts it. There is such a thing as rhyming too much, lol.