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Old 10-28-2002, 08:05 AM   #1
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"Broken"-A song

Broken

Fatal obsession, sinking in sin
No one to let me out of this cell I’m in
My life is waxing pale, I can see the end
Illusions fade away, death cometh ’round the bend
Silence screaming now, I want to die but I don’t know how
Demons keen and bow, Satan stands tall and proud
I can’t laugh or cry, been forsaken too long
Everything that’s good is gone, all that’s left is wrong

[So I stand alone] In my mind I see the dark
The hate that burns cold and stark
All that I felt leaves its mark
[So I stand alone] Rid my body of a soul
I will never be whole
Sigh as death takes its toll

Try to understand my indifference as I fight the fatal blow
You keep breaking me down, keep my head hanging low
Drag me through human clay, gouge my eyes so I can’t see
Angels condemning me, I can’t hope for life eternally

Broken, left for dead on a cloudy morning, shot in the head
Robbed of salvation, I can’t see the light (repeats)

chorus

They took it away, left me broken and hollowed
To whom it may concern, they’ve crucified me, yeah

chorus

So leave me broken
Broken, left for dead on a cloudy morning, shot in the head
Robbed of salvation, can’t see the light…


Okay, maybe it's just a little too dark, but I kinda like it that way. Hope you guys find something to like in it.
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Old 10-29-2002, 05:49 AM   #2
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that's good
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Old 11-16-2002, 01:43 AM   #3
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Wow! That's really good!
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Old 11-25-2002, 08:04 AM   #4
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Thanx you guys!!!
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Old 11-29-2002, 07:22 PM   #6
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the song

is really good,great lyrics.
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Old 12-02-2002, 08:10 AM   #7
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Hey, thanx. Wind, i can't help but ask what your sig means...
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