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Old 02-13-2004, 03:11 AM   #1
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Waste of Time

"Im a total failure,im such a lie
I try to do whats right,but every time I try
I end up falling face first into the dirt
I get back up only to get hurt
Im tired of trying and never seeming to get anywhere
Im tired of looking into the air with a blank stare wondering if You're really there

Beyond all that I can see,You're here waiting for me to come back
You're still here waiting for me to come to You

I look at myself in the mirror and break it with my hand
Because of the fact that I cant understand
Just why Im here in this place
Here without a clue and without a trace
Of why I feel so broken apart,why I feel so lost
Why I keep chasing after You at any cost

Beyond all that I can see You're here holding me
You're still here holding my hand here in this darkend land

Beyond all that I can feel,theres a part of me that knows You're real

I'll find my way to You someday when Im older (but by then it may be too late)
I'll trust in You when I feel my heart get colder (but by then it could be too late)
I'll look for Your shoulder when I begin to cry (It could be too late)
I'll put my life in Your hands before the day I die (It could be too late)
I'll want You when I need a little more (Its getting late)
I'll call for You before I hit the floor (Its getting late)

I fell to the floor and tried to call Your name
But I left the earth with a deadly stain
I will never know of what its like to see You pass by
Instead I see nashing of teeth and millions of the damned cry

The message I leave you is not of sorrow
But of a brand new hope to believe in tomorrow
All you have to do to begin
Is put your hope in Him."


I just wrote it,hope ya like it

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Old 02-13-2004, 04:46 PM   #2
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that's really good! Nice job.
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Old 02-13-2004, 06:22 PM   #3
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Thanks alot
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Old 02-13-2004, 06:52 PM   #4
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No problem......
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Old 02-13-2004, 08:23 PM   #5
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thanks it was really moving seeks word
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Old 02-13-2004, 09:16 PM   #6
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Old 02-14-2004, 07:26 PM   #7
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that was deep,pretty good!!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-14-2004, 07:57 PM   #8
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Thanks although its horrible compared to my good stuff.
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Old 02-14-2004, 09:24 PM   #9
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well i thought it was good.
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Old 02-15-2004, 12:15 AM   #10
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thanks again
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