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Old 01-14-2005, 04:16 PM   #1
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Our Long Goodbyes

Hiding in the summer breeze with you

Letting it take us where it will

Running in the night under the stars

Bare feet across the warm grass

Until we lay in the still holding hands

Afraid to let go

Not wanting you to get away from me

And then that breeze caught your hair

Playing with it in the wind

A backdrop to your beautiful eyes

Hiding your beautiful lies

Camouflaged by your beautiful smile

And I still miss the taste of that smile

But I wont let you take me where you will

Your lingering goodbyes still kill

They still pull at my heart

And they are still tearing me apart

The memories of who we were

And the reality of who you made me

More then I used to be

But before you took it back again

And its not how it was back then



And I will always keep a summer night for you

I’ll run in the breeze with the thoughts of you

And remember your smile and its taste

One that now tastes of other peoples lips

And the stars that played in your eyes

And ill forget the lies

Just to be with you awhile

To feel your smile

And look in your eyes

Forgetting the long goodbyes

Forgetting our goodbye
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Old 01-14-2005, 04:21 PM   #2
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Great visual that was awesome!
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Old 01-14-2005, 10:17 PM   #3
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that was awsome ***
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Old 01-14-2005, 11:39 PM   #4
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That was most beautiful. Very moving and very personal. Thanks for sharing this.
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Old 02-03-2005, 02:22 PM   #5
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aw that was soo nice, really personal and moving
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*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

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Old 03-01-2005, 04:15 PM   #6
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That was good!
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Old 09-03-2005, 12:20 PM   #7
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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