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By: Amy Aumick 2004
Why do my lips Burn to Confess All the sins I have yet to commit? Perhaps it is easier to Ask for forgiveness, Than Permission. |
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04-06-2004, 04:33 PM
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That was great Amy. Dare I say a little on the sexy side. I love the poems that say the most with so few words.
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04-07-2004, 03:50 AM
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Those first two lines are killer, Amy! Awesome job, as usual!
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I like it. Short, to the point, and impacting.
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you better go straight For Forgivness Skip the premisson, Part, haha, Im really in to your Stuff Aim, but i found this one funny in a way,
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04-07-2004, 03:39 PM
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Yes, Sister... It is about the fact that we are all sinners on this earth. I don't care how perfect you try to be there is no one human being perfect. That I am forgiven before I even sin is truly a delerious pleasure to me. Mistakes suck, but they help us learn. Thanks for the comments, y'all. Sexy, yes...just a hint.
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i know its weird girl but i here what your saying, Rock on!!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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