My First song!

Bridge of Clay · 02-10-2003, 08:26 PM

ok, here´s the first lyrics I ever wroted, for a song. I´m working on the guitar riff though.

You know how bad it is when people stab on your back? This is a song for all those people, that say shit about you behind your back!

tell me what you think, coz I don´t want it to sound similar to anything that you ever heard.

This song is called "LOOK AT ME!"

Walking around I hear the earth seeking relief
I’m trying to find a reason to live
But the mindless clutter my path
Oh these thorns in my side
I know I have something free
I have something so alive
I think they shoot ‘cause they want it

I feel forces all around me
Come on raise your head
Those who hide behind the shadows
Live with all that’s dead

Look at me…look at me
At least look at me when you shoot a bullet
through my head
Through my head
Through my head
Through my head

In my lifetime when I’m disgraced
By jealousy and lies
I laugh aloud ‘cause my life
Has gotten inside someone else’s mind

Look at me…look at me
At least look at me when you shoot a bullet
through my head
Through my head
Through my head
Through my head

Hey all I want is what’s real
Something I touch and can feel
I’ll hold it close and never let it go
Said why…why do we live life
With all this hate inside
I’ll give it away ‘cause I don’t want it no more
Please help me find a place
Somewhere far away I’ll go and you’ll never see me again

did you like it??? I hope you did!
tell me your opinion!

creeder · 02-11-2003, 03:40 AM

ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh a little copy of bullets....
You cant copy Bullets, its not so popular!

Redeemer · 02-13-2003, 10:01 AM

Marcos, that's great! It would be really good as a CREED SONG...

You know what, dude? You're a riot.

:lol:

Bridge of Clay · 02-13-2003, 10:07 PM

yep, thanks!!!

The thing is, don´t tell anyone, I sold the rights over this song to my buddy Stapp!

DangerousDan85 · 02-13-2003, 11:00 PM

man that song sucks pretty bad

Bridge of Clay · 02-14-2003, 06:30 PM

hahaha

well, I never said it was my best one!

Flip · 02-14-2003, 07:44 PM

Well wots ya best one then?

Bridge of Clay · 02-15-2003, 07:35 PM

the best is yet to come... I have a few lines done, but I didn´t finish it... here it goes:

I spent the day by the river
It was quiet and wind stood still...

I won´t post the rest coz I´m afraid someone make a copy of that...

creeder · 02-15-2003, 08:13 PM

Redeemer · 02-19-2003, 08:16 AM

Clever, Marcos. Real clever. :lol:

creeder · 02-19-2003, 08:56 AM

å nei!

Bridge of Clay · 02-19-2003, 11:49 AM

Quote: Originally posted by creeder
å nei!

what?

hey sid! thanks, you´re always supporting me! I´ll give you 10% of what I earn with my hard work!

Redeemer · 02-19-2003, 02:40 PM

Deal! Oh wait--you also *have* to bring me to meet Stappy! :lol:

Bridge of Clay · 02-19-2003, 10:47 PM

then I guess you share will be only 5%!

j/k

why do you wanna meet so bad my top client?
he´s not even real, he´s just an illusion! Pure computer special effects generated so you believe there´s a stapp!

Siana · 02-20-2003, 08:55 AM

marcos,have i told you you're a genius?lol

02-10-2003, 08:26 PM	#1
Bridge of Clay USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,025 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	My First song! ok, here´s the first lyrics I ever wroted, for a song. I´m working on the guitar riff though. You know how bad it is when people stab on your back? This is a song for all those people, that say shit about you behind your back! tell me what you think, coz I don´t want it to sound similar to anything that you ever heard. This song is called "LOOK AT ME!" Walking around I hear the earth seeking relief I’m trying to find a reason to live But the mindless clutter my path Oh these thorns in my side I know I have something free I have something so alive I think they shoot ‘cause they want it I feel forces all around me Come on raise your head Those who hide behind the shadows Live with all that’s dead Look at me…look at me At least look at me when you shoot a bullet through my head Through my head Through my head Through my head In my lifetime when I’m disgraced By jealousy and lies I laugh aloud ‘cause my life Has gotten inside someone else’s mind Look at me…look at me At least look at me when you shoot a bullet through my head Through my head Through my head Through my head Hey all I want is what’s real Something I touch and can feel I’ll hold it close and never let it go Said why…why do we live life With all this hate inside I’ll give it away ‘cause I don’t want it no more Please help me find a place Somewhere far away I’ll go and you’ll never see me again did you like it??? I hope you did! tell me your opinion! __________________ .:: "If people don't like guitar solos... then they're frikkin' stupid!" - Mark Tremonti ::.

02-11-2003, 03:40 AM	#2
creeder USER INFO » Status: Blue Collar Posts: 613 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh a little copy of bullets.... You cant copy Bullets, its not so popular! __________________ You now what I don`t like you at all You have nothing And i have it all I got nothing to share with you Maybe a piece of paper But what is that? Maybe it defines you? You are no one Just be your self "Complex!"

02-13-2003, 10:07 PM	#4
Bridge of Clay USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,025 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	yep, thanks!!! The thing is, don´t tell anyone, I sold the rights over this song to my buddy Stapp! __________________ .:: "If people don't like guitar solos... then they're frikkin' stupid!" - Mark Tremonti ::.

02-14-2003, 06:30 PM	#6
Bridge of Clay USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,025 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	hahaha well, I never said it was my best one! __________________ .:: "If people don't like guitar solos... then they're frikkin' stupid!" - Mark Tremonti ::.

02-14-2003, 07:44 PM	#7
Flip USER INFO » Status: Naked Toddler Posts: 297 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	Well wots ya best one then? __________________ Flip ¦¦Are you ready? ¦¦ ¦¦Creed¦¦pearl¦¦primalscream¦¦zildjian¦¦Premier¦¦Alter Bridge¦¦

02-15-2003, 07:35 PM	#8
Bridge of Clay USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,025 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	the best is yet to come... I have a few lines done, but I didn´t finish it... here it goes: I spent the day by the river It was quiet and wind stood still... I won´t post the rest coz I´m afraid someone make a copy of that... __________________ .:: "If people don't like guitar solos... then they're frikkin' stupid!" - Mark Tremonti ::.

02-15-2003, 08:13 PM	#9
creeder USER INFO » Status: Blue Collar Posts: 613 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	hehe __________________ You now what I don`t like you at all You have nothing And i have it all I got nothing to share with you Maybe a piece of paper But what is that? Maybe it defines you? You are no one Just be your self "Complex!"

02-19-2003, 08:56 AM	#11
creeder USER INFO » Status: Blue Collar Posts: 613 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	å nei! __________________ You now what I don`t like you at all You have nothing And i have it all I got nothing to share with you Maybe a piece of paper But what is that? Maybe it defines you? You are no one Just be your self "Complex!"

02-19-2003, 11:49 AM	#12
Bridge of Clay USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,025 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Quote: Originally posted by creeder å nei! what? hey sid! thanks, you´re always supporting me! I´ll give you 10% of what I earn with my hard work! __________________ .:: "If people don't like guitar solos... then they're frikkin' stupid!" - Mark Tremonti ::.

02-19-2003, 10:47 PM	#14
Bridge of Clay USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,025 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	then I guess you share will be only 5%! j/k why do you wanna meet so bad my top client? he´s not even real, he´s just an illusion! Pure computer special effects generated so you believe there´s a stapp! __________________ .:: "If people don't like guitar solos... then they're frikkin' stupid!" - Mark Tremonti ::.

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