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03-10-2005, 09:55 PM | #1 |
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Inamorata
Alrighty...my sophomore effort. I started this one a couple of nights ago & just finished it. You'll start to notice from A LOT of my poems that I love the one word titles with neat words.
"Inamorata" The most fragile of all flowers As the lily among the thorns Careful is she not to wilt in this world In her sweet little serenity Still yet it scars her core... Inside an hourglass glance of moonlight Our lives seem minute as to the speck of a star To flicker in our moment To fade out when it’s gone But daughter of blossoms Refuses to never falter Nor brush off all the briars That settle upon our hopeful hearts I wish I could see her See the way she shines into those eyes I wish I could be there Fill a vacancy where I’m left hollow inside -----------------------------------------------------------------------
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really enjoyed reading that...very creative and touching...thanks for sharing it...keep writing...
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Man Im Gonna Have To Get up Early To Top That One My Way Of Saying I Like It
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Thankyou both!!!
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03-10-2005, 11:42 PM | #5 |
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your welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Keep in touch over at the "Faith/Religion" forum. I think I'll start putting up some of my religious poems over there.
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nice man, i wish i could write stuff like that.
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*And I know* *You’re a part of me* *And it’s your song* *that sets me free* *I sing it while* *I feel I can’t hold on* *I sing tonight* *cause it comforts me* "You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same" find me here |
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i know it it was awsome i give it a 10 all the way
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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flowers nice i loved it!
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