Deserted

[nagpo]

As I lay here
I am stranded
Unable to
Articulate my thoughts

Blinking,
I'm reminded
Of my
Self destructing acts

Bleeding
And I'm broken
My heart's
Hollowed to it's last

I may not
Have no future
But atleast
I have my feet

So no matter
Where I'm standing
I'll have my
Mothers teet

I may not have water
I may not have lots of things

Instead I stand at the desert
Wishing for lots of things

As the moon shines, the brighter
As well as my hopes and dreams

I grasp for the water
And the clouds, they start covering

And I wan't to know
And I have to - got to know
If this world
Is where I belong

To tell you the truth
Wishes are made for fools

So I run
And run, and I got to run
And I run
Towards the sun

[McField]

well...at least you CAN articulate probaply...I jus't can't get what's on my mind on paper. And there's really no things for...keep on writing!!

[nagpo]

ha, thanks. u keep on trying, i'm sure you'll write something great.

[TrulyAmazing]

to tell you the truth wishes Are Made For Fools, Strong Verse I liked That The Entire Thing It Kinda Defined DESOLATION if i was at a potery reading and asked someone To try And To Define DESOLATION and what it means It would be a piece Just Like This Again Awsome Job Nagpo

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by McField)

well...at least you CAN articulate probaply...I jus't can't get what's on my mind on paper. And there's really no things for...keep on writing!!

Yes Nagpos right Keep Doing So You can be surprised at self of what you can just get on paper when brain storm you strike me as a free flow writer such as myself Haaaaaaaaaaaaa just dont force it it will come out on paper,

[nagpo]

Quote: (Originally Posted by TrulyAmazing)

to tell you the truth wishes Are Made For Fools, Strong Verse I liked That The Entire Thing It Kinda Defined DESOLATION if i was at a potery reading and asked someone To try And To Define DESOLATION and what it means It would be a piece Just Like This Again Awsome Job Nagpo

Thanks!

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

Thanks!

as always your welcome lets see here here on me tonite if i got any more of my to add one really strong verse nagpo i find it to be very much elborating i love to elborate potery these days and read other writers stuff i really have,nt had time to share any of my stuff with ya,s or put it on to paper for myself for that matter I May Have No Future But At Least I Have My Feet Thats Some Strong Stuff Its Acknowlging I dont Have To Depend All The Time On Soaring The Spirt Can Surley Soar Daily As The Flesh Will Set But You can feel Those Lines Soaring Of Saying I Have Breath I Have Feet And I can Do More On My Own Than I can Give Myself Credit For And Acording To All Thats Good My Soul Nor My Body Has To Take Desolation For An Option

[nagpo]

Thanks

[TrulyAmazing]

your welcome i got some new stuff too that is postble Haaa i hope to get it out soon guys

[nagpo]

cool, same here

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

cool, same here

groovy just a lot stuff is germatating right now cant wait to share with you guys then theirs just like your own stuff our donna lee had the pleasure of me sending some of my stuff with her i love my lager than life aspects openings and keeping it simple in views of how we grasp all things we reach for and sometimes potery is the only way to share it but i,ll try to leave the larger than life aspects out nothings ever really larger than life its the size of the mind thats grasping it i only have one larger than life influncer and his ways are simple but the concept all ways big looking foward to your stuff Kerri also she got some new stuff when she gets a chance she will also being sharing so when we all post im sure its going rock

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

Thanks

your welcome mothersday amazing grace bleeding Amrician Beauty And the Dying Left Best Unseen a lot stuff of written in short hand as its piled up i hope to get some theme out too, these came from a new inspiretion when i went into ghetto kick so yes those should be fun too to post and share

[nagpo]

ah, can't wait. this place is comin alive.

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

ah, can't wait. this place is comin alive.

yep got some cool stuff from a lot aspects