Condemned

[nagpo]

Isint the "friend" sorry?
Isint the "friend" sorry for what he seeks?
Isint the "friend" sorry for what the truth speaks?

I ask myself these questions
And bang my head against a wall
Losing my patience, vanity's not that far off

Quell the pressure, quell the pain
Hold my freedom with a side of maim

Hold it there, feel it right
Two more seconds and I'll die of fame

Apathetically demoralized
Stricken, beaten...one more time
Feel the flesh being torn?
My faith compels my scorn

Feel the demon, fear the night
Two more seconds and I'll die of fright

Fear the human, hold your knife
Dig it deeper until you feel allright

[TrulyAmazing]

your so bad awsome potery could feel a lot of pugery in that one Awsome

[nagpo]

[TrulyAmazing]

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hold your knife dig it deeper untill you feel alright i liked those lines

[nagpo]

same here.

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

same here.

yes indeed yes this could also use more feed back as well i,ll post my opions later those lines go in line with the bulding Of A warriors heart and a warrior of strong will thats what i liked it so much

[nagpo]

awesome, can't wait.

[TrulyAmazing]

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awesome, can't wait.

me either man those last lines that in the reader of a carnial eye feel so Agresive but when read through a diffrent prespective its beautiful

[nagpo]

really? i wish i could see through that prespective. maybe you'll help me.

[TrulyAmazing]

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really? i wish i could see through that prespective. maybe you'll help me.

ok im sleepy but as long as you got a good conversation going they say beauty is in the eye of the beholder sometimes that beholder cant see the own beauty of its irony and i dont think that the beholder is meant to see that beauty now keep in mind we are talking of views potery and many prespectives take your pick but im just giving mine k sometimes if one sees the beauty of that irony they feel they must uplift it i hope you can see through it that prespective of my opion

[nagpo]

i think i kinda understand. thanks makes me feel better about my stuff

[TrulyAmazing]

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i think i kinda understand. thanks makes me feel better about my stuff

yes sometimes i feel the sameway indeed that where i coming from in my potery that the reader misses the big point b/c i write sometimes about darker issuies heavey stuff and it seems really hopeless like my constant burning agoney , but if i write and some one does not like it and it makes me seen hypocrictial thats just me i feel a lot of that engery in your lastest sedate me good stuff

[nagpo]

oh thanks

[TrulyAmazing]

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oh thanks

living my life in misery wish i had something more than me to ease me sometimes i set and lie to myself how much longer can i live life this damn away wishing i had something to ease me just the thought of you damn mite even redeem me spend my time looking for more reasons just to please me thinking about nothing but damn i know i can take it, i,ll know nothing will damn will ever ease my pain i,ve seen good men fall and plunge without reason i,ve seen to many lifes shattered in vain yet i still believe somewhere some way i,ll have the right to damn say what i wanna say i know i could save a few but the question now still open whos going save me and see me through i love you all to much and dearly which i could say i dont hate a one of you but im only despise what i see with my own to damn eyes i hate the way i feel now but damn you all who kick me on way down the further i do down the stronger i,ll get back up may take a few you with me i,ll know you will get right back up with me i know u love to see me on my way down still feeling like i need to say what i need to say your welcome nagpo that was some new stuff i was working on all though i must say it sounded better in my head i left some of the raw stuff out like nail me to a cross beat me and kick me i did,nt want the message of the potery to get mixed up in stuff haaaaaaaaaaa like it usually does

[nagpo]

i like it. nice beat to it.