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01-22-2004, 08:09 PM | #1 |
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Insomnia
Wild frenzied thoughts
that live inside my head Like fireflies sparking, they illuminate my brain Ideas so varied and distant changing with frightening velocity Cataclysmic impulses strewn with inspired revelations Until the drugs kick in and turn the lights out.
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
01-22-2004, 08:44 PM | #2 |
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Wow, way cool imagery there...Well done, well done!!! Love the fireflies sparking...That is one busy brain you describe there
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Just my brain in it's usual state. Probably why I don't sleep well.
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
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Very vivid, though...Really cool poem! Thanks for sharing!
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I think that is your best one yet! Great imagery.
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Yep. Very relevant to me. Well done
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