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Old 06-21-2004, 02:00 AM   #1
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Tender Is Thine Words Tender Is Thine Heart Tender Is Thy Soul Why Must Be It Broken so Many Times Ive Cryed As Ive Tryed To Heal It So Many Times Tender Is Its warmth But come Out Of The Cold Looking For Someone To Hold Tender Is Thine Touch It Can Keep Me From Never Giving Up Tender And Pure Is Thine Kiss And Thine Tears Are As Tender As A Newborns First Tears Like A Sweet Melodie That Goes Heared But Yet Un Heared Tender Is Thine Embrace Tender Is Thine Touch Upon My Face Tender Is Thine Look In Your Eyes Shy but Yet Wanting To Play Still Tender Is Thine Pain That Helps The Angels Pour Down The Rain Tender Is Thine Love When It Rushes Through My Soul I Now Even Find Tenderness In Thine Stregneth Even Thine Boldness is Tender You Speaketh In Words That Make No Sound Your Spirt Is Hard To Be Found It Takes A Lot Of Tenderness To Know How Divne thine tenderness Is Its Love From A Secret Place Were Thy Angels Are Taken When They Fall I Can Now Say That Inside It Is Where I Want Stay Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep, Your Heart I Know I Will Keep And If I Dye I Know You Will Be There Before I Wake You Would Make Sure It Would Be Taken To The One You Know Best Tender Is Thine Ways It Knows No Evil Tender Is Thine Grace Your Love Could Never Be Replaced
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-21-2004, 11:55 AM   #2
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tender is the heart that writes this piece...very honestly written...just a suggestion tho...it would be easier to read if put in verse form...

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Old 06-21-2004, 12:26 PM   #3
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) tender is the heart that writes this piece...very honestly written...just a suggestion tho...it would be easier to read if put in verse form...

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Bless You, How Do Ya Put n Verse Form
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