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Old 12-13-2003, 01:55 AM   #1
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By: Amy Aumick 2003

There are some things in our lives
That we lay upon our souls
Or were they writ
Before?

Chosen in ethereal form
To learn from time and again
Or do we choose it as
We go?

From the moment we’re born
Till that eternal clock winds down
Mirrors show us of ourselves
In time.

Mirrors of other people’s words
Praising or damning our worth
Watching for our falter
Of step.

But you oh not you love
You won’t point or stare
But help me up
After all.

Love is from you as it is from me
Radiating for everyone to see
My brothers, my sisters
And me.
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Old 12-13-2003, 10:16 AM   #2
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Awsome amy,,that ,,Was very heart warming,,and touching,,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-13-2003, 10:24 AM   #3
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mirrors of other peoples words prasing or damning our worth whatching for our falter of step,,,That is well written and so true,,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-13-2003, 11:20 AM   #4
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I love it, Aimee. Keep 'em coming. That last verse is especially touching.
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Old 12-13-2003, 12:22 PM   #5
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That was really really nice Amy. I love your stuff.
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Old 12-13-2003, 05:19 PM   #6
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That was beautiful Amy!
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Old 12-13-2003, 11:56 PM   #7
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Very nice! Very touching!
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"...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..."
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