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Old 01-09-2004, 08:13 PM   #1
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Sleep

Sleep my love
No more pain
Close your eyes
Listen to the rain

Silent slumber
Mind is still
Dreaming sweetly
Heart no longer ill

Feel the warmth
Of the peace
No sounds, no thoughts
Body at ease

To not wake up
To always be safe
From the hurt and confusion
That only I gave

So, sleep my dear friend
Sleep until tomorrow
Until the sun warms your face
Until there is no more sorrow
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Old 01-09-2004, 09:16 PM   #2
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Very comfy poem kris
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Old 01-09-2004, 11:00 PM   #3
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Beautiful, Beautiful!!!

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Souls...
they float like the memories I've opened,
Go...
and kiss all the butterflies I've broken,
Sow...
their wings to the coat of my misfortune,
Grow...
to reach the plains only I have spoken...


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Old 01-10-2004, 02:26 AM   #4
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Wow, wonderful, Kris!!!! I love that last verse!


btw...your sigs ROCK !
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Old 01-10-2004, 02:29 AM   #5
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Yea,that was very nice
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Old 01-10-2004, 02:59 PM   #6
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Thanks guys. I haven't been writing for awhile and then all of a sudden!


Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) btw...your sigs ROCK


I keep changing it because I love them all and can't decide which one a really want! Lately though I have been obsessed with The Noose!
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Old 01-10-2004, 07:22 PM   #7
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Great poem, Kris!! It's such a comforting poem.
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Old 01-10-2004, 07:30 PM   #8
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Quote: (Originally Posted by SCOTTSMYMAN) Thanks guys. I haven't been writing for awhile and then all of a sudden!





I keep changing it because I love them all and can't decide which one a really want! Lately though I have been obsessed with The Noose!
LMAO, I hear ya...I'm still obsessed with Pet...I can't tell you how many times I hit repeat on that one...
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Old 01-11-2004, 06:28 PM   #9
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I'm obsessed with that one too!
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Old 01-13-2004, 08:07 AM   #10
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Awesome, delicately put together yet charming, definately worth reading.
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